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Joined: Aug 2011 Gender: Male  Posts: 170 Location: Koopa Kingdom. Karma: 1 |  | James Cain District 1 « Thread Started on Dec 11, 2011, 12:56am » | |
Name: James Cain Age: 17 Gender: Male District/Area: District 1 Appearance: Hi I'm James I'm... Wait... you're telling me I have to tell them what I look like before I can introduse myself... fine.
I'm roughly around 6 feet tall and farily thin. So ya I'm that tall skinny kid you always happen to see and once you do so you can't help but to think "God someone give that poor kid a sandwich". Now dispite this I'm not compleatly skin and bones I do have some muscle on me but my career training mostly focused on my speed and my brain power. If you couldn't tell I'm not that big as far as muscle power goes. Also I should say that I also have really bad eye sight so I have to wear a pair of square metal rimmed glasses... ya you already know where this is going NERD!
Ya I look like a nerd big deal I mean it could be worse right I mean I could live in a district filled with amazing looking people like District 1 right hahaha... ya I know not funny anyway MOVING ON!
Anyway My hair is jet black. I would like for my hair to be a bit longer but due to the fact that it curls I have to keep it short. It's not even the good kind of curling it's the kind where one half of your hair is sticking up and the rest is down, my point it's annoying. Anyway my eyes are steel blue, it's really the only trait that my whole family shares. That's pretty much it for my apperance so can I finally introduce myself... YES! Personality: So ya hi I'm James. As you can tell I'm a very scarscastic kid. Also you could probally see that I am a bit hyper as well. Also a tad bit weird... ok very weird, but it's all in good fun. When I'm in my comfort zone I'm typically a happy kid. Now of corse though that is all when I'm in my comfort zone.
Outside of my comfort zone I'm very diffrent. I'm shy, I'm quiet, I avoid people, and I can be very bitter. Now I know what you're thinking "I understand shy quiet and avoiding people but why bitter"... ok you may not have been thinking that but I don't care now do I. Anyway I'm not what you would call a willing career. I'll explain it a bit more when I talk about my past but whatever. Anyway because I'm not to fond of being a career I'm not that well liked in the District.
I'm really not fond of the idea of killing a bunch of kids for sport. No it's not because I happen to be all like "Oh no stop killing is wrong" it's more like I'd rather just avoid being the one doing the killing. Personally I wouldn't mind the thought of going through my life as normally as possable (and now you know why I don't want to be a career.) I don't really hate those who train to be careers and I don't really hate the games either I just hate the people who hate me. Also I'm a compleate freaking nerd ON TO HISTORY! History: I was born on september 17th at 11:59 pm along with my twin brother Logan who was born 10 minuets after me causing him to be born on the 18th. Yep thats right a pair of twins born on two diffrent days get over it. Now while I may be the older brother in this whole situation you wouldn't know it by looking at the 2 of us. Logan happens to be huge. He's 250 pounds of pure muscle and is a good inch taller then me. He's what some would call a perfect career. He's strong, smart, can swim unlike many people in the District. He could easily become the leader of the stongist alliance in the games if he got reaped, just like our old man.
My dad was the victor of the 24th hunger games and was one of our district's older career victors. He's trained both me and my brother for years and has trained us both very diffrently but making sure we could still use a sword just fine. Our dad was an expert on bladed weapons during his games and mannaged to kill all of his victoms using a sword. Now while my brother Logan has always been a lover of the broad sword I've always been closer to the katana (wow I'm talking about a sword like I'm in love with it that isn't weird or anything.) I guess our sword prefrenceses kind of represent our own skills, Logan's strong and I'm fast.
I've always been a bit jelous of Logan. He's strong while I'm not, he can go out of the house and not act any diffrent then around family and I can't help but shy away from people, he's popular and I'm not, not to mention the fact that he happens to be good looking and I'm avrage at best. If you couldn't tell he is basacally exactlly what the capitol would want in a tribute. I would be pissed about this... if it wasn't for the fact that my dad is pushing for my brother to enter the games way more then he is for me. He's pretty much understood that I don't want to enter the games so he never pressured me to. Codeword: Odair Comments/Other:
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Joined: Mar 2009 Gender: Female  Posts: 297 Location: market Karma: 23 |  | Re: James Cain District 1 « Reply #1 on Dec 11, 2011, 2:35pm » | |
[justify]Hi bowserboy129. So, the history definitely needs one more paragraph to fit the requirements. Paragraphs are usually 5-7 sentences. Also, instead of putting stars around your characters actions, for example: *sigh* it would probably be better to just write out your characters actions within a sentence or two. Thanks! After you edit, reply back and we'll take another look.
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Joined: Aug 2011 Gender: Male  Posts: 170 Location: Koopa Kingdom. Karma: 1 |  | Re: James Cain District 1 « Reply #2 on Dec 11, 2011, 2:46pm » | |
LOL! Haha I only modified that post so that incase my brother took the computer while I was gone I wouldn't lose anything. Anyway sorry about the confusion it should be good now.
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Joined: Mar 2009 Gender: Female  Posts: 297 Location: market Karma: 23 |  | Re: James Cain District 1 « Reply #3 on Dec 11, 2011, 5:00pm » | |
[justify]Haha okay. Anyway, I'm going to accept this bio, but I definitely recommend spell check and adding in a few more commas to make your sentences flow. Thanks! [/justify]
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