Allison Black- District 4

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reneeroberts
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Allison Black- District 4 Apr 15, 2014 14:58:46 GMT -5 via Tapatalk

Post by reneeroberts on Apr 15, 2014 14:58:46 GMT -5

Name: Allison Black

Age: 18

Gender: Female

District/Area: District 4

Appeareance: Long black hair, super white skin, green eyes, skinny.

I know that im pretty, but i dont like that people stare at me, i think im a good person, but im kinda shy, i can make good friends and i'll protect them and love them forever.

History:
I was a normal girl, my life was boring, i went to rhe trainments even though i didnt liked to, i used to think that wasnt fair for the other districts, when i had free time o liked to swim and search for rare treasures so then i could sell them and got more food for me and my familly.
The day i was choosed i fainted, i looked so ridiculous.
Now im hopping to win.

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Allison Black- District 4 Apr 15, 2014 21:21:15 GMT -5

Post by ᴥ on Apr 15, 2014 21:21:15 GMT -5

Welcome to the site~ you've got a strong start to a bio so far but there seems there was some confusion with creating a character.

-First off, we do not allow you to "create" a tribute. Every four months or so we hold a site-wide reaping, once Allison is accepted you are welcome to enter her into the upcoming reaping check! From now on please post all applications in the "character creation" section.

-We need a codeword before this bio can be accepted. The codeword is underlined and bolded in the rules Here

-Our character template requires at least two paragraphs for appearance, three for personality and three for history. As of right now Allison's bio does not reach this requirement.

-Try to get creative! We have many character creation guides, I suggest giving Saph's How to Create an Acceptable Character, a read. Try to avoid making her too perfect, and balance out your negative and positive qualities.

-Reply when you've made these changes~

Last Edit: Apr 15, 2014 21:21:46 GMT -5 by ᴥ

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reneeroberts Seam Resident 2 POSTS last seen Apr 16, 2014 11:59:49 GMT -5	Allison Black- District 4 Apr 16, 2014 11:37:10 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by reneeroberts on Apr 16, 2014 11:37:10 GMT -5 Im so sorry! Tehehe~ im new on this , so i didnt knew anything, thanks for the advice anyways, i'll make the changes