Chris King [District 12]

Hey Trozee! A few things we need to work on here.

-He's far too young to have a four-pack at this age, muscles like this usually develop later in puberty.
-Someone his height couldn't jump anywhere near four feet in the air.
-Punk Clothes don't exist in Panem, especially with D12 being so poor, there isn't much variety.
-You cannot work in the mines until you are eighteen, and all children under that age are forced to go to school
-Parkour doesn't exist in Panem, nor would this be realistic for a ten year old.
-It's highly unrealistic for him to have been beaten nearly to death by a gang.

Please remove these details and elaborate on the others! Bump it when fixed and someone will take another look! ^^