{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip}

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Jul 27, 2014 15:20:05 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Jul 27, 2014 15:20:05 GMT -5 Aaaannd... Done uvu
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Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]
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cozy, queer af

{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Jul 28, 2014 15:27:20 GMT -5

Post by Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy] on Jul 28, 2014 15:27:20 GMT -5

Hiya! Just a few things before I can accept this app --

1)
pale yet tanned

I don't think this can be a thing - could you pick one please?

2) Could you also give him some flaws in his appearance?

3) He can't have been diagnosed with ADHD and given medication because they probably wouldn't care about it in the Districts - even an upper district like D3.

4) I don't think they have 'elite' schools in the Districts - I think they have pretty much standard fare to feed the Districts Panem's history and whatnot, but it's questionable that they would have anything advanced beyond that.

5) I don't think he can mix music, considering I'm not sure what music the Districts would have available to them besides local songs.

Besides that, I think this looks good! Post here when you're done editing. ^^

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flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Jul 28, 2014 19:11:12 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Jul 28, 2014 19:11:12 GMT -5 I'm on it uvu fixing to edit. But what I meant by pale yet tanned was that his natural skin tone is so pale than even when he's tanned he's pale.
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 1, 2014 3:20:20 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 1, 2014 3:20:20 GMT -5 Bumping because I wasn't checked on the last checking spree
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 2, 2014 19:03:39 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 2, 2014 19:03:39 GMT -5 Bump
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

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{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 2, 2014 19:21:43 GMT -5

Post by cass on Aug 2, 2014 19:21:43 GMT -5

Hiya!

"He can't have been diagnosed with ADHD and given medication because they probably wouldn't care about it in the Districts - even an upper district like D3." You need to take his official diagnoses out, make it more of a 'we think, but we don't know, but we can sure as hell assume' kind of thing.

For the surgeon part district three would have a few being an upper district, but I don't think they'd have very many specialised classes for it. It would be more of a backalley shady thing, where you learn from reading and experience rather then school. So be careful with that, okay?

I really think you should expand more and how he faces his ADHD without medication. Like the things he does to control it, rather then just say he does it.

Post back when you have made the changes ^^

Last Edit: Aug 2, 2014 19:22:36 GMT -5 by cass

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 3, 2014 0:35:08 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 3, 2014 0:35:08 GMT -5 Okay I'll edit it when I access a computer
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 9, 2014 18:28:41 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 9, 2014 18:28:41 GMT -5 And I understand about the surgeon thing. That's why I said that he's hoping to be one. Like I said, ached emit summer camp for extra studying.
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 15, 2014 21:12:48 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 15, 2014 21:12:48 GMT -5 Bump.
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 19, 2014 18:13:59 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 19, 2014 18:13:59 GMT -5 Bump
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."

flyss Career Tribute 646 POSTS last seen Oct 6, 2023 20:50:54 GMT -5 hi! miss u guys	{Spark Meyers} {District 3} {wip} Aug 22, 2014 21:41:20 GMT -5 via Tapatalk Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flyss on Aug 22, 2014 21:41:20 GMT -5 Bump
	Credit: Shrimp Credit: Avalon "I could have been so much more than just Neptune. I could have been a whole damn galaxy."