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gm bourgeois decadence [aya]
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Old Unused Prewrites Feb 20, 2017 20:09:50 GMT -5

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Post by gm bourgeois decadence [aya] on Feb 20, 2017 20:09:50 GMT -5

Show off the prewrites you wrote but never got to use here! (Especially BB-death tributes!)

I'll start:
a prewrite I'd had for the 70th in case Elya needed to carry one of her allies (or Gunner) to safety:

Elya Johnwayne

god if i have to die
you will have to die

Across the massacre, her allies were holding their own just fine. Half of Leon's request came to mind: "...keep him safe." That wasn't Elya's style, to look after others — not since Dan had sentenced himself to death in an arena not unlike this one. Certainly not people she didn't much care for, people she'd met a mere week prior. And yet...

She heard the snap, the howl before she saw the mangled, bloodied limb. Before she knew what she was doing, she'd already crossed the battlefield, already stooped and and straightened, her ally over her shoulder like a sack of concrete. "Fuck," she swore, limp complaining under the load, "lose a few pounds before you get your leg fucked up next time." Still, she soldiered on, leaving the carnage behind them.

[ flees with ALLY ]

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Old Unused Prewrites Feb 22, 2017 15:26:47 GMT -5

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Post by kap on Feb 22, 2017 15:26:47 GMT -5

An attack post I was going to use for Sage these Games (75th) and never did.

Everything around Sage was completely chaotic. Left and right, in front of him and behind him, people were being attacked. He wasn’t quite sure what to do, as his mind was spinning. Though, after a moment of panic, he decided that he needed to fight back. Lashing out, he aimed to hit another tribute. Trying his best to avoid other attacks that were aimed at him, he swiped up the item nearest to him. Unfortunately, it was only a crayon. Sage was a bit irritated that he hadn’t managed to get something better. Regardless, he wasn’t going to leave empty-handed.

Come on, I have to do this. For Parsley and Affron, I have to make it out, he told himself.

”Aaaagh!” Sage shouted as adrenaline pumped through his veins. He was more determined than ever to do the best he possibly could. The bloodbath was not his place to die. If he was going to die in the arena, he wanted to get further than that.

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Old Unused Prewrites Feb 23, 2017 11:43:09 GMT -5

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Post by я𝑜𝓈𝑒 on Feb 23, 2017 11:43:09 GMT -5

[Percy Delacroix, flee]

we are all for none and none for all
we are the sickness and the symptom and the cure
we are all for none and none for all
we are the sickness and the symptom and the cure

She is drowning.

Submerged in the chaos- she cannot breathe, she swears. It is like the air around her has become thick water, and the waves are crashing over her head, forcing her down down down into endless fathoms of darkness. When her heart skips a beat, when her breath begins to cease, and her body is shattered by shudders, she knows she cannot stay here any longer.

Percy looks at her allies, and the blood on the floor.

She does not know who is dead, who is living. She only knows one thing: she must leave.

"Run!" she calls to them frantically. "Fucking run, dammit!"

so close your eyes let the colors fly
and hide from the noise outside
we're colorblind from the black and white
but we've never burned so bright

[Percy Delacroix flees the bloodbath]

"even stars burn out."