bikimio | nine | fin

Hey there!

So there are a few adjustments that need to be made to this bio before it can be accepted.

First of all, a trigger warning in the first post or in the subject line would be helpful as Bikimio has a lot of trauma in her life that other members may need to be prepared for before reading.

Second, there are a lot of grammar and spelling issues especially in the appearance section. Lots of "Her" missing their ending r and periods where I think you meant to put a comma. It would make the bio, as a whole, easier to read by fixing these small issues.

Third, could you expand more on Bikimio and her father? You say that he snapped but more detail into why he turned from a loving father into a monster would give the character a richer background.

Once these changes have been made post in this thread again and staff will take another look. If you have any questions feel free to pm me or other staff on site or on slack.

Thanks^^