Raven Patten || District 3 || WIP || FINISHED

parapink Seam Resident 18 POSTS last seen Feb 19, 2014 13:02:41 GMT -5	Raven Patten \|\| District 3 \|\| WIP \|\| FINISHED Jan 7, 2014 12:15:34 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by parapink on Jan 7, 2014 12:15:34 GMT -5 Name: Raven Patten Age: 14 Gender: Female District/Area: District 3 Appearance: Personality: History: Codeword: oDair Other: Character Face: Carolina Thaler
	Last Edit: Jan 7, 2014 17:24:05 GMT -5 by parapink

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Raven Patten || District 3 || WIP || FINISHED Jan 7, 2014 15:27:21 GMT -5

Post by parapink on Jan 7, 2014 15:27:21 GMT -5

Appearance

Raven is tall for her age. At 5'10'' she can easily tower over a lot of people. She weighs 132 pounds. Her face is framed by her dark brown hair. Nowadays, her hair cascades down her shoulders, and, sometimes, she pushes her medium long bangs back. Her hair usually is straight, but when in contact with water it gains a few curls in each side of her face.

Her blueish silver eyes are usually very watchful of her surroundings. They are shaped as almonds. Her lips are full and colored pink. One trait that she doesn't like in her lips is the almost permanent tiny pout because of the fullness of her lower lip.

Raven loves to wear everything that is bright. Whether it is a pink shirt or a electric blue dress. She loves making odd color combinations and the only pieces of light clothes she has, are used to make the other colors pop out. The dark colors are also almost an extinction in her closet.

Personality

Raven is not a quiet girl. In fact, she loves to talk and laugh loudly. Even in sad times she has always an happy-go-lucky facade. She tries to make everyone happy, even if she is unable to give advice. But while she is loud and friendly, Raven doesn't trust easily and when it comes to get to know her she is very closed off.

She is a good friend to everyone and likes to know that people are worried about her, even if they don't know about her true self. She dislikes people that fake their relationships with others. She is also ambitious and that easily clouds her vision of things. Despite being friendly to everyone, she doesn't mind to step on others, that aren't close to her, to get what she truly desires.

She is also courageous and curious. One day she would love to explore all the other districts. With this side of her comes her reckless side. Raven often rushes off to things that could be prejudicial to her. More often than not, she tries to manipulate her siblings and friends to go with her.

History

Raven is born as the third in her family. A upper middle class family of the District 3. Luce never had much to worry during her early days of her childhood, but, when she reached her teenager years, she realized that she needed to prove herself. With two older siblings, the girl didn't know how to exceed expectations and, since then, she became more ambitious than ever.

Outdoors are Raven's life. She couldn't live a day without going outside. She shares her love for being on nature with her older sister, Yuki. Yuki is an idol to Raven, as she sees her as the best friend that she could have. She influences a lot of Raven's personality and choices because she tries to make her proud of having her as a sister. When Raven was younger she remember following her sister around just to see what she likes doing.

Being a fourteen year old, she doesn't follow her sister as much as she used to. And divides her free time being with her family and outside exploring and trying to have adventures. Even in times of sadness, she tries to keep her mood uplifted. One day she hopes to explore the world outside of the district 3

Last Edit: Jan 8, 2014 16:00:17 GMT -5 by parapink

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Raven Patten || District 3 || WIP || FINISHED Jan 8, 2014 5:07:57 GMT -5

Post by cass on Jan 8, 2014 5:07:57 GMT -5

Howdy, Parapink!

Just one thing before she can be accepted!

What do you mean by her eyes changing colour? Are you simply pointing out that the reflection from the sun gives them a silver look? Or direct light actually changes their colour? xD? Could you clarify, please! Keeping in mind that we don't allow character eyes to change colour, as in, actually change.

Thank you! Reply back here when you have made the edit!

-- Cass

parapink Seam Resident 18 POSTS last seen Feb 19, 2014 13:02:41 GMT -5	Raven Patten \|\| District 3 \|\| WIP \|\| FINISHED Jan 8, 2014 14:11:27 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by parapink on Jan 8, 2014 14:11:27 GMT -5 I've changed it! Is it good?

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who needs another thing to be sad about?

Raven Patten || District 3 || WIP || FINISHED Jan 8, 2014 15:49:58 GMT -5

Post by rook on Jan 8, 2014 15:49:58 GMT -5

"Her green eyes seem to turn to a blueish silver when she is out in the sun." - I'd like to pick this up again. We don't allow eyes to change color, as Cass pointed out. "Seeming" to change color feels like a cop-out to me, and so can I ask you remove it all together? Do that and I'll accept her. Thankies! (:

an hourglass is just a glass with sand inside

parapink Seam Resident 18 POSTS last seen Feb 19, 2014 13:02:41 GMT -5	Raven Patten \|\| District 3 \|\| WIP \|\| FINISHED Jan 8, 2014 16:01:18 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by parapink on Jan 8, 2014 16:01:18 GMT -5 Done!

rook Veteran Member 2,361 POSTS Pronouns: he/him last seen Sept 26, 2023 15:42:53 GMT -5 who needs another thing to be sad about?	Raven Patten \|\| District 3 \|\| WIP \|\| FINISHED Jan 8, 2014 16:18:24 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rook on Jan 8, 2014 16:18:24 GMT -5 Accepted~
	an hourglass is just a glass with sand inside