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My hair is jet-black, and is let loose around my shoulders. My eyes are shaped like ovals, and they are hazel. My face, many features that I don't like. The pimples that litter my skin, or every time I suck in my breath, a gurgle erupts from my throat. It's common in my family, but It makes people laugh at me. There are parts of my face, that I love, and things that I hate about my face. The pimples, and other nasty little things I hate, and most of the other things on my face, are actually pleasing.

My face. My favorite part of me. My nose, its smooth bridge. My mouth, its plump shape, and its dark rosy color, just make me feel good. My body is slim, I don't have much muscle. I'm more logic than muscle. I have very quick hands, It lets me work fast, and I get things done quick.

I only weigh about 120 pounds, I don't think it's much. Maybe that's because I have food to eat almost everyday, and I'm satisfied with every meal. My legs, they go quick. I'm a fast runner, and I run like the wind. I get lost in running, I just keep running, and get lost in the moment. I love the feeling of the wind on my face, as I run and run.

I wear clothes that my parents give me. I don't complain, I do with what I have, and I don't pick about. It's selfish to be like that. You should appreciate what you have. My hair is styled in a braid, sometimes two braids. I usually do the braids for myself, because my mom has slow hands.
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I'm mean. I know that is bad, but I can't help it. I'm rude, but I'm not selfish. I don't do things that hurt other people. I just say things in a rude way, and don't apologize about it. I think they should know when to get out of someone's way, or stop doing things.

I'm only nice to my family. They grew up with me like that, and they know when to stop doing things. Many people don't know when to stop. I think it's my job to make people know when to stop doing things by showing tells. My friends know to stop talking, or singing when I shake my hands, or tap my foot. It tells them that I'm agitated at something.

I love the smell of gasoline. I smell a lot of it, since I'm in the transportation district. I just love the smell. It just attracts me for some reason. It just smells so good to me. I don't like the color purple, when I see someone wear purple, It makes me want to punch them, and gag. The color purple was my ex-boyfriends favorite color. He loved it, and when I was sixteen I found out that he was cheating on me, wearing purple. Every time I see the color purple I t reminds me of him. So it sickens me to see people wear the color, that my cheating ex-boyfriend loves!
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I was born to some magnificent parents, who work as train mechanics, except my mom. My mother stays home and cares for the house. She does the household repairs, like water, and broken items. She does her best to repair them.

At 2, I finally said my first words. I said "mama.". My parents said they were thrilled when they heard that I said something. My mother said she had a gut feeling that I would have been mute. She says that I would have to learn sign language to show her what I want, and need.

7, it was the best eyar of my life. I just loved seven. I just made so many friends, and It was a happy year for me. My parents got a lot of income this year, and we weren't classified "poor", anymore. We still lived in our same house, but It looked better than ever.

12, was the year I was dreading. The reaping. The reaping was upon me now. I had to endure the pain of seeing the face of the child that was going to die. I made me sick to my stomach, of seeing the people that were dying. I was scared of going, but I had to or I would have been punished.

17, the age I am now. It was the worst year by far. My father got seriously injured at work. Me and my mother waited for him to come home. Alive and well. Thats not what happened. He died. My mother and me fell in to depression. We just sat their at the kitchen table, frozen at the news that we heard. My father dead. When I was little, I would have denied that he would have died at this young age, but he did. The funeral was small, and sad. Depression filled the air on that day. I gave up on life. I think I will never be able to get over this part in my life. I know that I will need to move on someday, but not this year, or next year. This time is to mourn. To mourn my father.

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fromenta;: d6 finished Oct 14, 2016 17:17:43 GMT -5

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Post by sbeeg on Oct 14, 2016 17:17:43 GMT -5

Hey there Fuzzy,

In her appearance you say:
My face, many features that I don't like.

and then in the next paragraph you say:
My face. My favorite part of me. My nose, its smooth bridge. My mouth, its plump shape, and its dark rosy color, just make me feel good.

So does she like everything about her face or are there parts she doesn't like? Elaborate.

Also in personality:
I don't like the color purple, when I see someone wear purple, It makes me want to punch them, and gag.

I'm very curious as to why she doesn't like the color purple. Is it linked with a hurtful memory? I'd love some more details about this.

Also please put her district in the subject line of the thread.

Once these changes have been made post again and we'll take a second look.
Thanks^^
Geebs

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