Lior Comtois District 2 Finished

No tribute[Bray] Merchant [M:-370] 137 POSTS last seen Nov 24, 2013 23:18:52 GMT -5	Lior Comtois District 2 Finished Jul 22, 2013 19:51:46 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by No tribute[Bray] on Jul 22, 2013 19:51:46 GMT -5 Name: Lior Comtois Age: Sixteen Gender: Male District/Area: District 2 Appearance: Personality: History: Codeword: Odair Comments/Other:
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Lior Comtois District 2 Finished Jul 23, 2013 0:13:55 GMT -5

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Lior Comtois

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Check yes Juliet
Are you with me?
Rain is falling down on the sidewalk
I won't go until you come outside

The Breakdown

"Ahh!" I screamed in pain as my large fist made contact with the wall. My knuckles were pouring blood. I shook it off and tried to ignore it. I could feel more and more anger build up inside of me. I kicked the wall again, and my foot wiped off the majority of blood off of it. I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around to see the root of my anger. I wiped my brown hair out of my eyes. "What do you want?" I said with attitude, "You betrayed me back there" My eyelids closed and covered the ocean of blue. I scrunched my face furiously.

"Lior, will you just calm down a minute!"Hannah Wilson, the girl I thought loved me, yells. "It wasn't my fault! He did it to me. I didn't want it!" She looked at me with utter disbelief at my actions. But, I didn't do anything wrong. She kissed him. She kissed Jarett. She kissed my brother. Jarrett was all I had left of my family and now it's gone.

"You kissed Jarrett. Ever since my family left us, you and him were all I had. And now you guys are turning against me! I loved you Hannah!" Right after I finished screaming Jarrett came around the corner. The sight of him made me angry again. Why can't I ever control my anger! I thought to myself. I knew it wasn't my fault I was angry. Hannah was all I ever cared about. She was my only priority. I didn't want anything but her. For all I cared, I would give up being healthy and muscular if it meant I got to stay with her. But watching her kiss Jarrett was just to much. I felt like I knew what it was like to be dead. Because, when you're dead you lose everything. I lost everything when I saw that kiss.

"Listen, bro. You have every right to be mad. But, not at Hannah. You only saw that part. We were talking and waiting on you. I kissed her even though she said no. So be mad at me," jarrett tried to mediate things. What he said made sense and I believed him. I was still angry. Furious even. I couldn't control myself anymore. My caucasian skin turned to a tomato red.

My voice got louder. It became rougher. "I'm not mad at Hannah! I'm mad at you! You were my only family! Now, I'm just an orphan! With no one!" People started staring at us. I hated it. "I love Hannah! You took her away from me!"

"Lior! You didn't lose me. I still love you. I'm not going to leave you because of this. Because, you're right. You didn't do anything wrong. It's just anger. But that's not your fault either. You have anger issues, I can't blame you for that. Lior, I love you with all my heart," she tried her best to calm me down and secceeded. I wasn't angry anymore. I became resentful towards Jarrett. I don't trust him at all, and I try to stay away from him as much as possible. It's hard to sometimes though. When you have talked to someone everyday of your life since you were one. It's hard to just stop.

Check yes Juliet
Kill the limbo
I'll keep tossing rocks at your window
There's no turning back for us tonight

Meeting Hannah

People passed by me in the halls of the school. No one tried to talk to me. They were all to scared. They were afraid of me. Just yesterday I had went berserk on a teacher. I screamed and yelled. I almost punched her. She failed me and I didn't like it. Now everyone is scared of me. I have always tried my hardest to hide my anger at school but I failed.

I pretended that I was alone in the halls. I imagined that no one was watching me. It worked for a while, untill blonde girl, at least a foot shorter than me(which is bad because I'm only 5'10) walked up. "Hey! Im Hannah, Hannah Wilson. I heard about what happened yesterday," she says. I started to feel angry again. It's one thing to stare at me, but to come and make fun of me is another. But then she quickly covered for herself, "I just wanted to say that I don't judge you for that. My little brother has anger issues. I mean, he never gets as angry as that, but I understand that it's hard to control. It's not your fault. I'd like you to meet him. He needs someone older that can get him to talk to. Meet me at the square after school. Kay?" She stormed off before I had the chance to respond.

After school I decided I would go. Jarrett went with me, because he was the one that was a good talker. I didn't know what to say. When we got there, Hannah was there, but not her brother. "D-Didn't you say you were going to bring your brother?" She flashed a white smile, and I flashed an equally white, but more nervous one back.

She took a second to answer my question. But when she did, I enjoyed the answer. "I don't have a brother. I have a crush,"she winked at me, and my smile grew wider. I knew that this could be a start of what I have been looking for. Ever since that day, she has been the center of my attention.

Lace up your shoes
Ayo ayo
Here's how we do
Run baby run
Don't ever look back
They'll tear us apart if you give them the chance
Don't sell your heart, don't say we're not meant to be
Run baby run, forever we'll be
You and me

Being Left

The memory comes in flashbacks. I don't remember all of it, but I do think I know most of it. I wasn't expecting to come home to a happy family. I never did, my parents hated me. Everything Jarrett and I did ticked them off. Everything they did made me violent. But this time, I came home and one of them asked me a question, "How was your day?" Or something like that.

I didn't take it very well. "Since when do you care? You hate us. So don't talk to us," I ordered them. My mother looked at me with wide eyes. My father stood up and didn't hold back. I felt his fist on me hard. I don't remember exactly where the first hit landed, but I know there was more. Over and over again it came. I wasn't able to fight back. I don't remember Jarrett jumping in, but after it was over he was just as bruised. I felt my long, dark hair being pulled from my head.

"Erika! I can't take it any more! I am taking them to the orphanage!" He screamed. I started to struggle more. I don't remember what my mother said in reply except that she agreed with him. He grabbed my shirt collar and pulled me out the door. I suppose he had Jarrett in his other hand. I fought and screamed and tried to break free. But to no avail. That's the last thing I remember before waking up in the district orphanage.

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