Take Me Away (original song)

Made an original song, complete with a tune! If I ever post it on YouTube, I'll give you guys the link, but for now it's a work in progress. I'm also going to add a few violin solos, because I play the violin, ad because it's appropriate for the tune, which is inspired (but not copied from) the song that Pippin Took sings in Return of the King (from Lord of the Rings). Hope you like it! Please, review! I really need critique.