Breaker Arlyn | District 4 | Done | Hunger Games: The RPG

RIP Cystine Crystal Merchant 105 POSTS last seen Jun 28, 2014 3:13:41 GMT -5	Breaker Arlyn \| District 4 \| Done Apr 22, 2014 17:37:00 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by RIP Cystine Crystal on Apr 22, 2014 17:37:00 GMT -5 .
	Last Edit: Jun 28, 2014 3:05:20 GMT -5 by RIP Cystine Crystal It's too bad this place is so cliquey, really. It might've been fun, otherwise.

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who needs another thing to be sad about?

Breaker Arlyn | District 4 | Done Apr 23, 2014 8:49:27 GMT -5

Post by rook on Apr 23, 2014 8:49:27 GMT -5

Content looks good to me. Can I get a few more sentences on both appearance and personalty, though? Maybe talk about her social life, if one exists. Her likes/dislikes. Stuff like that? Thanks!

Post again when you're done.

Rook.

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RIP Cystine Crystal Merchant 105 POSTS last seen Jun 28, 2014 3:13:41 GMT -5	Breaker Arlyn \| District 4 \| Done Apr 23, 2014 20:02:08 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by RIP Cystine Crystal on Apr 23, 2014 20:02:08 GMT -5 Done. ^-^
	It's too bad this place is so cliquey, really. It might've been fun, otherwise.

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