Jesse Willingham district 4

I have a few problems with this:

1. There is almost no character at all. You could add a lot more details. Eye color? He has freckles where? How tall is tall? How long is his hair? Why is he shrewd? Did something happen to mke him that way? True? True to what? Why did his father leave? And what family did he fed for? You only mentioned a father atferall.

2. Your traits aren't even in complete sentences. Nor is your history. Please at last do that.

3. You are missing some letters from the codeword.

It's not too hard to write very much. I've written more than you have on this one post of mine. You can do it! Thank you!