BlueEyes District 4

mellisa84
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last seen Apr 15, 2010 21:35:29 GMT -5

BlueEyes District 4 Apr 6, 2010 19:18:22 GMT -5

Post by mellisa84 on Apr 6, 2010 19:18:22 GMT -5

Name: Mellisa
Age: 13
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 4
Appearance:

Tall, skinny,kind of pale,long, thin, bright blond hair, roundish shape of face, wears glasses, small eyes, small figure, but muscles underneath, pretty, but not stunning

Personality:

Outdoorsy, strong, funny, smart, athletic (loves sports), very caring and loves to help people, a little shy, very clever, and not judgemental

History:

Parents are divorsed, has two brothers, and two sisters, but only lives with one sister, is the youngest, live with grandmother, gandfather dead, live in a small town of 324 people. Works on a farm. Has a minature dashhound named Milly.

Codeword: mutations
Comments/Other:

Last Edit: Apr 7, 2010 22:20:49 GMT -5 by mellisa84

Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy] Retired Staff 6,346 POSTS Pronouns: He/Him last seen Nov 17, 2023 15:15:56 GMT -5 cozy, queer af	BlueEyes District 4 Apr 6, 2010 19:22:10 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy] on Apr 6, 2010 19:22:10 GMT -5 Could you please add more information to the appearance, personality, and history? Also, your codeword is incorrect. Fix all of those things, and then I'll accept.
	Last Edit: Apr 6, 2010 19:22:28 GMT -5 by Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy] warehouse

mellisa84 Seam Resident 4 POSTS last seen Apr 15, 2010 21:35:29 GMT -5	BlueEyes District 4 Apr 7, 2010 22:22:56 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mellisa84 on Apr 7, 2010 22:22:56 GMT -5 I dont mean to be a pain, but what other things hav i left out on my appearance, personality, and history. I changed my code thing is it right now. thx

Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]
Retired Staff

6,346 POSTS
Pronouns: He/Him
last seen Nov 17, 2023 15:15:56 GMT -5

cozy, queer af

BlueEyes District 4 Apr 7, 2010 22:29:23 GMT -5

Post by Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy] on Apr 7, 2010 22:29:23 GMT -5

Oh, it's no problem.

Anyways, your appearance, personality, and history are very vague and they don't really tell us much about your character. Also, they're all just one sentence long. So could you please fix it?