Kidnapped[OPEN]

So as to what Doc is saying, Clove, you are performing major accounts of godmodding; and, I highly find it implausible that this would be accepted even with consent unless you can make it sound realistic enough to appease me. By the summaries of Doc and Dee, your character has performed actions that I find... ridiculous that only one person can do.

Being all killing-machine on thugs when the person is just a female is highly unlikely and hilarious in notion alone. Thugs are generally male by connotation meaning; and, Juliana being able to kill them all with hardly a scratch is... hilarious. It's a bit ridiculous. I think I would have gave a bit of a leeway if, say, Po helped; but, from Doc's word, Po wasn't able to lift a finger. This, in all seriousness, is an issue. Your char, from what I had to dig through to find in Upper District char Apps, is just 15-years old... yet these thugs are what? I'm thinking at least 20s or 30s if you want to easily kidnap a girl; so... yea.

Doc has said he TRIED on PURPOSE to get these girls capture, yet you killed them all off. What?

Last thing, pretty minor compared to what I've heard: chains. Chains are SUPPOSED to be hard to come out of. I didn't read on how you get out of them; but, when a person is trying to deliberately go along with a plot, shouldn't you... try to go along with it. Maybe Doc should have covered you on what he had intended; regardless, the many cases of thugs trying to capture just this one girl could raise a flag. Either way, getting out of chains are not supposed to be a child's puzzle.

Please cut down on the godmodding as it is just as bad as powerplaying and can earn some eye rolls. Playing with people that never get in trouble/never have difficultly while just about every other 15-year old girl - who are developed right and realistically - WOULD is also Mary Sue-ish. Just please cut down on this and try to have fun with plot. It's not like Doc can't seriously hurt you without your consent.

-- Luna