Post by Breeze-Chan on Jan 7, 2010 22:12:44 GMT -5
Ok, I been writing a book called 'Untitled'. It's about a girl named Gabrielle who wants the best for her mother. It's set in 2112 or something(I don't have the file with me.) and all civilations are in domes because there was this deadly chemical in the air outside. Gabrielle is inlove with her best freind, Fang, but is pushing him away "because its for the best".
I'm thinking about putting this in to explain Gabrielle's feels, but I'm not sure about it. Please give your thoughts!
I'm thinking about putting this in to explain Gabrielle's feels, but I'm not sure about it. Please give your thoughts!
Chapter five:
I knew I loved him. How couldn't I? He's been their for me my
whole life, picking me up when I was down. He made me laugh
when I was about to cry.
And I was madly in love with him.
But, the thing is, there was a rule against relationships with our
co-workers in the labs. Lord Snotch thought it would make us act
rash if something bad, for the lack of a better word, happened.
So, I did the thing any girl in my postion would do.
I told him I never wanted to see his face again.
So, when I was on my forced break(Each empolyee had to have
at lease a fifteen minute break each day. Lord Snoch doesn't
want use to over-work ourselves.)
I would watch him work. Of course, I hid behind the fake tree by
his station.
He was talking with that new girl, Maria. She was batting her
long eye-lashes and flipping her long dark hair ove her shoulder,
leaning in close to him. there where barely an inch between the
two.
What happened to the regulations? There's suppose to be no
dating co-workers! That's why I was stalking Fang instead of
dating him!
Spencer gave Maria the evil eye and she scampered off like the
dog she is.
"I know your there, Gabby." He called to me, making my heart
flutter, but not because he was talking to me. He called me
Gabby! He didn't call me that since the last time he asked me to
visit Aimi, when I told him Gabby was dead and Gabrielle took her
place.
I stepped out from behind the plant a brushed off my lab
coat. "How did you know?"
"I just know you." He gave me that smirk that made my heart go
a hundred MPH and stop at the same time.
He turned to Belle. ''Ok, Subject VI," He said in a demanding,
authoritive voice that made me smirk. I mae faces behind his
back, making Belle giggle. He turned back to me and mock-glared.
He turned back to Belle. "Time for your inections." He held up a
needle with something. It wasn't belle's normal injection. It was
off a shade of purple.
He injected the subtance into her veins and a guard lead her
back to her cell.
"What did you give her, Fang?" If Belle didn't get her daily
injection, she would die. She needed the extra glucose it gave
her.
"Water, food dye, tiny bit of corn syrup, and glucose," The reply
was so smug.
I knew I loved him. How couldn't I? He's been their for me my
whole life, picking me up when I was down. He made me laugh
when I was about to cry.
And I was madly in love with him.
But, the thing is, there was a rule against relationships with our
co-workers in the labs. Lord Snotch thought it would make us act
rash if something bad, for the lack of a better word, happened.
So, I did the thing any girl in my postion would do.
I told him I never wanted to see his face again.
So, when I was on my forced break(Each empolyee had to have
at lease a fifteen minute break each day. Lord Snoch doesn't
want use to over-work ourselves.)
I would watch him work. Of course, I hid behind the fake tree by
his station.
He was talking with that new girl, Maria. She was batting her
long eye-lashes and flipping her long dark hair ove her shoulder,
leaning in close to him. there where barely an inch between the
two.
What happened to the regulations? There's suppose to be no
dating co-workers! That's why I was stalking Fang instead of
dating him!
Spencer gave Maria the evil eye and she scampered off like the
dog she is.
"I know your there, Gabby." He called to me, making my heart
flutter, but not because he was talking to me. He called me
Gabby! He didn't call me that since the last time he asked me to
visit Aimi, when I told him Gabby was dead and Gabrielle took her
place.
I stepped out from behind the plant a brushed off my lab
coat. "How did you know?"
"I just know you." He gave me that smirk that made my heart go
a hundred MPH and stop at the same time.
He turned to Belle. ''Ok, Subject VI," He said in a demanding,
authoritive voice that made me smirk. I mae faces behind his
back, making Belle giggle. He turned back to me and mock-glared.
He turned back to Belle. "Time for your inections." He held up a
needle with something. It wasn't belle's normal injection. It was
off a shade of purple.
He injected the subtance into her veins and a guard lead her
back to her cell.
"What did you give her, Fang?" If Belle didn't get her daily
injection, she would die. She needed the extra glucose it gave
her.
"Water, food dye, tiny bit of corn syrup, and glucose," The reply
was so smug.
