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The Great War - Novel Jul 26, 2010 16:46:55 GMT -5

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Post by sapphire on Jul 26, 2010 16:46:55 GMT -5

Here are some guidelines to this Novel
Do NOT, I repeat NOT respond to this thread! Each post, will be a new chapter. ^_^
Post you comments Here.
This is an alternate timeline, so none of these events will/have never happened.
Told by Sos. About Cinder. O.o -Couldn't think of names so just used Cinder and Suace- O.o
Quint is the Badass Marcel Savor. O.o
Some parts are VERY cheesey.
Thanks for reading. ^_^
Lastly, there is no foreshadowing in the Prolouge. ^_^

Prologue

The war was near and my best childhood friend was the one the Council had chosen to be out Savor. How could she be the one to be the Savor of the People? She was a 15 year old girl! I loved Cinder to death, and my only thought was, save her. Cinder had gone into bending training like everyone, but her abilities were unnatural. She had gone through every element with ease and within a year of the first one, she had all elements mastered. Everyone had hated her before she had been named the Savor. Now, she was harassed and stalked! She had only one true friend that stood by her through everything, me, Suace. I was the only one that was standing up for her to the others.
Cidner had been an outgoing girl, until she became the Savor. Now, she isn’t around much anymore. Our people were going to war, and she had to face the other states Savor. At age 15 also, Quint, her twinbrother. Quint was the ruthless one of the two. He would kill his sister faster than he killed his parents, when they were 13. Quint had used his bending to force his parents into a cage made of fire, burning them to death. Cinder was the only thing that was in the way of complete domination of the two states.

The legend goes:

Lorraine and Marcel had been at war for thousands of years. Legend tells that the first pair of twins that survived in the New World, would become the Savors of each of the two states. One would be ruthless, violent, and merciless, while the other would be beautiful, peaceful, and smart. The two would be separated at a young age and would never see each other again, until the Great War.

The Great War would be the last time the Twins will see each other. One is to die, while the other shall have complete control over the two states. Their true powers and sides show in the Great War. One will have mastered all weapons known to man, and the other one, the elements.

I had heard the legend many times, but now, the Great War was among us, and the love of my life would be fighting to the death. Quint will probably chase Cinder until she gets tired and collapses, killing her. I had imagined the day many times but, I never knew that today was the day. The Savor was asked to choose someone to command the Savor’s army, and, I at 17 had been instructed by Cidner to command the Savor’s army. I would make sure, that none of Quint’s army was to attack Cinder. Here, I would probably die along with many others.

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The Great War - Novel Jul 27, 2010 13:21:54 GMT -5

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Chapter One - Entering the War

I walk into the room where Cinder was staying, and she was lying on the bed, staring at the ceiling. "I am going to die out there. I know it," she says, i guess knowing I had walked in. I walk over to the bed and lay down next to her. "Nothing is going to happen to you," my reassuring words flowing out of my mouth. She turns and curls up to me and closes her eyes. I turn to wrap my arms around her, knowing this may actually be the last time I get to be near her, much less hold her. I look down at her, and see tears steadily streaming from her closed eyes. i kiss her forehead and say once again, "Nothing is going to happen to you," I add on, "I won't let it. I promise."

"Thank you," she mumbles to stutter out from her mouth. "Cinder, I love you," I say before I even know the words are coming out of my mouth. I had loved her, since I met her. I just never told her, in fear of rejection. She sits up, breaking my hold on her. I follow her movement and am sitting next to her. "I love you too," she says, catching me off guard. I had been so focused on rejection, I had never thought of her actually loving me back. I take her hand and pull her close, wrapping my other hand around her thin waist. I had never kissed a girl, but I guess it came natural to me. When our lips met, I knew I wasn't going to lose her. She was too young, and too beautiful to die. When our lips are finally pulled apart, we leaned on each other, foreheads connecting staring into each others eyes.

Lorraine was a larger state, so we had an advantage, but they were strong, mastering weapons, while we mastered Bending, Magiq as the Marcelians called it. Someone burst into the door saying, "Cinder, time to get yo--" He didn't finish before he saw us, as we looked at him, our hands entwined with each others. "Oh, Uhh... I'm sorry," he said and backed out of the door closing it. Cinder laughs, making me smile. I loved hearing her laugh. I always had, it meant she was actually happy. Not, just trying to fake it for people. She reaches her hands around my neck and pulls me close in a hug, whispering in my ear, "I love you."

She pulls away before I can say anything and goes over to the wardrobe. I look inside as she opens it. Inside, sits a pure, pearl white armor suit. The golden lining shines in the light pouring in from the window. The Lorraine sat on the front. "Whoa.... I say as I stare. Nobody our age had ever seen something like that. "Like it?" she giggles. It looks heavy but, when she picks it up with just one hand, it didn't seem as heavy anymore. "Yeah, it's amazing," I manage to whisper. She takes off her over shirt, leaving her in a tank top, all I can say is, "Uhh....."

She giggles and slips on the metal top, and turns to the mirror. She snaps the clips and locks on the sides. I notice that there are two rather large slits over the should plates on her back. "What are those?" I ask, pointing are Rhea slits. "You'll have to wait and see," she says as she winks playfully at me. She shapes the armor to fit her perfectly by bending it by just simply placing her hands on the metal. I get up and walk over to her; I hug her, and say, "I guess I need to get ready too." I kiss her cheek and head out the door.

End of Chapter One - Part One

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The Great War - Novel Jul 27, 2010 15:19:22 GMT -5

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Post by sapphire on Jul 27, 2010 15:19:22 GMT -5

Let's lay somethings down.
I have no idea what Cinder looks like, so I just wrote her as I imagine her.
The armor is white, with golden lining. :3
Oh... I have to describe/find a picture of the swords....
Cinder's specialty in Bending is Electricty.

Chapter One - Entering the War

The halls were crowded, many soldiers were preparing their weapons and armor, shining it, and making sure that they look nice. I walk to my room, and enter inside the practically glowing room. Lying on my bed was a set of armor, a twin set. i walk over and lift up the light armor, two holes, just like Cinder's. I slip it on over my shirt, and i feel the metal, it's soft. I push the armor into my self, and it molds. I give a quick smile and keep molding it to fit me. After about 15 minutes, I look in the mirror. Except for the occasional dent, which I would get Cinder to fix with her bending, it looked pretty decent.

I look into the wardrobe to find a simple, thing sword. The handle had the crest of Lorraine carved into it. I pick it up, light just like the armor. I throw it around a bit, testing the durabilty against my strength, It was sturdy, yet productive. The door opends and my head snaps toward the door. Cinder was standing the doorway, full suited in her gleaming armor. She's also holding an identical sword to mine. I smile, the armor showing off her burnette hair, and deep hazel eyes. She walks over to me, takes my sword out of my hand, and lays the twin swords down in the wardrobe. She wraps her hands around my necj. Her sweet lips meet mine, making me tingle with electricty, on of her specialties. I gently wrap my arms around her thin frame and pull her as close as possible. Even as we are kissing, a smile still spreads across my face. She was the only one I loved.

I don't know how long we were standing that close, our lips pressing firmly against eachothers. She pulled away though, leaving me dazed. She puts her hands on my armor, and turns her foot just so slightly, forcing the dents out of my armor. "We want you looking nice, don't we?" I nod, and pick up the gleaming twin swords, hand one to Cinder, and take the other in my hand. I take her free hand and lace it into mine, making sure I had a tight hold on her, in fear of her being swept away from me forever. She pulls close and kisses me one last time, and the we walk to to the door.

We try to walk as fast as we can, only to be slowed by the many crowds walking along with us. Soon enough though, we are in the barracks courtyard, where all the troops were lining up, last minute preparation; some were practicing marching, while others were saying good bye to love ones. Many of us weren't coming back. I sigh and scan the groups, the girls and boys were lining up, oldest in the front, youngest in the back. The youngest person, a girl, looked about 11. These people were here to protect the only thing that could save them from the Marcel's.

Cinder

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The Great War - Novel Jul 27, 2010 17:49:47 GMT -5

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Post by sapphire on Jul 27, 2010 17:49:47 GMT -5

Let's talk about somethings.
I always imagined This song for this scene.
Bleh, if you read back, Saucer/Sos has the slits too. Does he have wings? Or does he not? I don't know. >.>
Bleh, this was a crappy part of this chapter.
*Spoiler* ~~Cinder doesn't die. Or does she?~~

Chapter One - Entering the War

The horn sounded for the soldiers to line up, I sigh and let go of Cinder's hand. I kiss her cheek and head off to my position. She heads to hers, but not before saying, "Watch over me, my darling." I smile, and watch her walk, then to a run, then the most amazing thing happened! She literally jumped off the solid ground and wings seem to appear, out of no where. The feather's were a pure white, with blonde stripes, almost like highlights. The wings matched out armor. She glided up to the top of the highest tower around the walls of the barracks.

She gently landed and relaxed her wings. With her relaxed in one hand, and white wings, she was beautiful. Her long brown hair swayed into the breeze. I smile, as she stares into the field of where she would fight to the death with her brother. I sigh and turn to start walking toward the front of the Savor's Army. We would be at the front, as would Quint's army. I sigh, and look at the many people that had volunteered to be here, to protect.

With my sword in hand, I look at the large doors that were the entrance to these barracks. I remembered my first day here. I was 11, as was most when they entered the Army. I was still in school of course, but this was the place that I had met Cinder. Quint had just killed their parents, and she was sent here to be cared for. The other, older, children that were in out class teased her, because of her brother. She would often disappear for a few days, thus made the teasing worse. One day, some boys from her class were beating the crap out of her in the Courtyard, so, being the Saint I am, I yelled at the other kids and picked her up. She pulled away at first, but then realized I was helping her.

Thinking of that moment made me smile, I look up at the girl standing on the walls, with wings. A common myth we heard about, but had never witnessed. I guess now that we have seen the true thing, it is no longer a myth. I mumble under my breath to Cinder, "Now, it's your turned to kick some ass." I smirk and, look back down the the doors. I nod and the doors slowly open. This was my last chance to protect Cinder, and I had to succeed or the consequences could be fatal.

End of Chapter One - Part Three
End of Chapter - Entering the War

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The Great War - Novel Jul 27, 2010 22:53:11 GMT -5

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Post by sapphire on Jul 27, 2010 22:53:11 GMT -5

Aight, Sos said he wanted Water and Wind, sadly though, his elements will not show in this section of this chapter. Dx
Bleh, this part is hella cheesy. >.>
Couldn't think of much, cause of damn Writer's Block.
Hope you people that are reading it, like it. :/
This is the only thing that kept me writing this part of the chapter. >.>
Chapter Two - Onto the Battlefield

I take one last glance at the girl I love, and see she jumps off the ledge. I look down and see her wings steadily flaping in the doorway of the barracks, waiting on her protecters. I nod and pull myself onto the black horse. Quite a contridiction, white armor, black horse. I hold the reins in my left hand, and sword in my right. I sigh and gently squeeze the horses sides. It takes off at a brisk trot. I look back, to see and hear the drummer boy and girl, they looked like they are 11, sadly at the front with the oldest. Poor kids may be the first to die out here, along with me.

I sigh, and look back to the front to see were I was going. I look up to see Cinder flying under the mask of the clouds in the sky. Her white wings and armor making it hard to see her. Suddenly, i think about the two slits in my armor, 'Wings...' was the only thought that could cross my mind. I give a laugh at the subject, a normal Water/Electricity bender like me could be nothing that sofisticated. We had a ways to go before we actually reached the place were everthing was going to happen, but the good thing was, was that we were about 2 miles from the edge of Marcel.

I mumble under my breath, "C'mon. Where are you" I scan the horizon of the afternoon sun. We would probably not reach the actual edge of another hour or so, so I hope that these troops were up for a long walk. I look up into the clouds, searching for Cinder only to see her falling. My heart instantly race's; I want to do something, but I am completely frozen. My eyes widen as she spreads her wings at last moment, slowling her down harashly. I gasp, and then see her laughing. Although i couldn't hear it, I knew she was having last minute fun. I smile at the girl, hoping she doesn't see me.

I squeeze my horses sides again and race over to her, as she is sitting on the ground laughing. "Having fun?" I ask the hysterical girl. "Ye-ha-ah," Cinder says, "I haven't done that in a while, not since the beginning of my Savor training!" I smile and say quietly, "Looks like fun." I jump off my horse and sit next to her. I lace my hand into hers and say, "I love you." She leans on my shoulder and replies quietly, "I love you too."

End of Chapter Two - Part One

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Chapter Two - Part Two

You could feel the steady beat of the troops feet falling to the ground, taking them one step closer to their death. I gently stand up, and help Cinder up. I nod to her and put of my foot in the stir up and pull myself up onto the large, black horse. I look back at Cinder and she is already in the air, steadily beating her wings, to stay aloft. I squeeze the sides of the horse and turn him around and gallop back over to the army. I look back at Cinder and watch her stay under the cover of the clouds, then I see an arrow.

Arrow?! "Crap, they decided to come to Lorraine to fight," I mumble under my breath and take off as I see the horizon rise. The troops had many numbers, the youngest looked like they were in the front. I saw a girl holding a small .22 caliber rifle. I tilt my head slightly. but the realize the gun was aimed at me! By instinct, I sort fall/jump off my horse. None of my army had weapons, thankfully. They didn't have as much to carry because of the elements that they held, but never carried. I looked around for any water, my main element, but saw none.

"Crap," I say resorting to my secondary element, wind. What I basically did, was a side-kick and that sent a huge gust of wind, taking out about 50+ soldiers. Now though, the other arm was sending bullets in ever direction. Thankfully not doing much to our army because of the steel armor. Suddenly, I remember Cinder. I look up into the sky, nothing. 'Oh, no.' was the only thought crossing my mind as everything seemed to clash with another. Elements and bullets were everywhere. Some of the older benders had mastered every technique, where sending the most powerful attacks at the Marcel army.

You could feel the electricity in the air, as benders were send lightning everywhere. I panicked as I saw my army falling. I look back up at the sky for Cinder, still nothing. Then I saw her, she was flying as fast as she could, a combination of gliding and darting. As fast as I had seen her, she was gone. I looked around in the sky and saw her and Quint literally clashing swords against each other sending sparks flying. I guess one of the water bending masters started a storm, because rain was falling everywhere. I smirked, and gained control of the water that was falling around me, freezing it in space; I squeeze my open hands into a fist, turning the water into ice, and send it flying toward the army, piercing throats, heads, and armor.

Everything moved so fast that I didn't even see the archer from the Marcel army, point his bow at the fighting twins into the sky. The effect of when I saw the arrow flying seemed like slow. "No!" I seem to yell as I send a gust of wind at the arrow and the twins. As I watch my gust hit the twins, sending them flying away from each other. I run over to Cinder and whisper to her as I help her up, "Sorry, arrow." My eyes were pleading for forgiveness. I look back at the archer, who had disappeared. Quint was struggling to get up as I arrows and bullets seemed to soar right through him, like he was a ghost.

End of Chapter Two - Part Two

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Chapter Two - Part Three

"He is," I hear Cinder mumble. I look at her confused, "What?" Her response startles me, "He is a ghost." I look at her, then back at Quint. Everything around me and Cidner seemed to be diverted by an unknown force, while the bullets and elements went right through Quint. "He was killed by his own sword a few years ago, I don't know by who, but he was," she tells his story solemnly. I continue to look at her, my eyes begging for more information.

She stares at her brother, and the sounds of the war seem to disapear; it was just Cinder, Quint, and I. Cinder continues her brothers story, "That is how I found out, that if I was to be killed, I need to be killed with my own sword too, that way I can live forever, unless my brother was to kill me in that state too." I understand and watch as Quint gets up and grabs the sword from the ground near him. I look around, and see that Cinder's sword is there to.

My eyes widen as I see him lean down, and grasp his ghostly hands around the white sword, that is identical to mine. "He's going to try to kill you," I mumble under my breath, my voice raspy and frightened. "Yeah, he is," Cinder says and literally jumps into the air, her wings unfurling and she is flapping. When, I finally look she is well above the ground and soaring; I look back at Quint, and he is gone too.

After my 2 minutes of standing in the middle of the field, with elements, and bullets flying, I realize that I need to get back to the protection of the armor. I quickly grab my sword and turn around. While facing the Marcel army, I do a basic gust that takes out a few troops, but not many. I continue doing the same move until I have successfully taken out at least 100 men and women.

I don't pay attention to anything except my bending and the rain. I cough, and grab the water around me, making it into ice crystals again and send them flying. The rain was making everything seem like a haze, but that was just the steam from the fire benders' fire, and the rain. the combination seemed to be boiling the Marcel's. The sides were even agaisnt eachother. I look around on the bloodied ground, and see the girl I had seen back at the barracks, lying on the ground in a pull of blood, the side of her throat pierced, and bloodly like everything else.

End of Chapater 2 - Part Three