It's A Winner!!!
Sept 30, 2010 21:53:28 GMT -5
Post by Prim <3 on Sept 30, 2010 21:53:28 GMT -5
WARNING: This story might be disturbing to the weak minded. But, it's a real contest winner and its all mine! It's not that great, and I have no idea how it won but it just kind of did. Enjoy! ;D
Best Friends For Never
And in an instance everything went black. The numbness that had started at my toes had spread rapidly up my body until I couldn't feel my legs. There was obviously no escape. Panic set in as I realized I was probably going to die. I don't even know where I am. I'm just a ten year old with messy brown hair and dull gray eyes. I'm not even that pretty, so why would anyone take me? I'm so confused. Tears started pouring down my dirty face as I fought to remain conscious.
It was so impossibly dark and cold. No wait, it wasn't cold, it was icy. My memory began to fade as I sat there. All I remember was roaming the streets on Halloween night in my lady bug costume. Then it just........ goes black. Somehow I ended up here. What is this place? I forced my eyes to adjust, seeing that it was just a room. No lights, no windows, not even a door. If I die here tonight, I would never see my momma, my puppy, or my baby brother. I whimpered at the thought, and started bawling all over again. I started to hyperventilate, fear pressing into my chest so that I couldn't breath
I gasped for air between sobs as I lie down on the ground, and curled into a ball, holding my feet to my chest. That's when I heard him. My best friend forever, Chase, was screaming my name, Kirby. His shrieks startled me into a sitting position.
"Chase!!!" I called back hoping he would hear me and come to the rescue. I stood, ignoring the agonizing pain that followed. My hands felt along the walls, trying to find anything that would get me to Chase. His screams became more frantic, my hands danced on the walls. Then I was blinded by a white light. The impact of the light in my eyes knocked me to the ground.
I heard Chase's hysterical giggles, like he had just found me in a game of hide-and-seek. Only this was nothing close to a game. "Kirby," Chase said, his green eyes looked crazed, " I finally found you". Chase's appearance shocked me more than his words. His body looked deformed, one arm was bent the other way, and his face structure was totally messed up. The only way I recognized Chase was because of his emerald green eyes.
But I could see the Chase I knew was gone, and was replaced with this monster. He was holding a long sharp butcher knife in his right hand. It was shiny and clean of blood, unlike his drenched clothes and face.
"What did they do to you, Chase?" I whispered softly. My ten year old mind couldn't be more confused.
"THEY? THEY SAVED ME!!!" Chase bellowed,"Now I'm going to save you." The way he walked would give me nightmares for months if I survived. It was like a hobble, limp thing, it's indescribable. I wanted to run straight into the light, but I was petrified. Chase was now standing right over me, the knife raised above his head laughing wickedly. The images of the event hit me hard as the drugs wore off.
Me and Chase trick-or-treating. Chase luring me into a dark alley. Some big man snatching me up, and throwing me in the back seat of a white suburban. The man injecting drugs into my arm. Realization, that Chase was never my friend hurt worse than the knife shoved through my heart.
Sooo yeah, that's my story. Comments? Opinions?
NOTE: There was a 600 word limit on this so it would have been longer but, the limit.