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CC is SO Sorry D:
Merchant

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last seen Nov 29, 2010 13:34:27 GMT -5

Molly's My Hero

Arthur Cline District 10 Sept 9, 2010 18:10:10 GMT -5

Post by CC is SO Sorry D: on Sept 9, 2010 18:10:10 GMT -5

Please just add...like two paragraphs more to Appearance, Personality, and History. Try to expand on what you have already. I would recommend checking out some accepted character bios to see how most people do theirs.

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CC is SO Sorry D:
Merchant

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Molly's My Hero

Arthur Cline District 10 Sept 10, 2010 18:36:00 GMT -5

Post by CC is SO Sorry D: on Sept 10, 2010 18:36:00 GMT -5

Next time, Perkins, you can just post again that you edited his application. You don't need to PM me. Thanks. ^^

Arthur could still use some more description for all of them, but particularly Appearance. How tall is he? How much does he weigh? What shade of red is his hear? Does he have muscles in his arms? Try looking at the accepted Peacekeeper bios, which have special detail. I hope that helps.

Doublepost. Totally alright...

~~Psht. I'm demi-staff, I can get away with it...~~

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