Kelsey Blowne District 7 [[[[EDITED))))

Hiya! I need you to fix a few things before I can accept. :-)

1) Could you maybe add some more flaws into her appearance?

2) Her personality seems a bit.. unrealistic. If you're going to make her a psycho, you really have to sell it to make it seem real. And uhh.. "And her inner demon is always bugging her. No lie. His name was Bob." Not only did you switch tenses in one sentence, but that bugs me a bit. I don't know why that bothers me, but for goodness sake if a character is going to have an "inner demon" or someone that talks to them, please let it not be named Bob.

3) It would be nice if you would lengthen your paragraphs some. You have a lot of information but you don't go into much detail.

4) Yeah.. this is all a bit unrealistic:
-911 would not exist in Panem.
-A five year old wouldn't be able to kill strong, functioning adults or even a teenager. Or anyone for that matter.
-You have no reasoning behind why she killed them. There needs to be a reason.
-Prison? Think more along the lines of execution.
-A five year old with morals who KNOWS that they just did something wrong without someone yelling at them? A five year old must be told that they did something wrong.

If you make this much more realistic and you fix those things, then post here and I'll see if I can accept.