Alex, District 10

I'm sorry to say, but you need to write out a History, no matter what.

Also:

I don't make friends easy but when I make friends they're loyal because they know I'm a great person.

I don't take pride in much about myself, but the things I really take pride in are my singing voice and my intelligence.

This seems like having pride in yourself above, contradicting the second quote. Please explain what you mean.

Finally, please expand on the Personality.

Modify your post of the necessary changes and reply to the thread for another go. Thank you.