Teddy Hisen District 4

Hi there,

This site has a requirement of:

-2 Paragraphs for appearance
-3 Paragraphs for personality
-3 Paragraphs for history

Before your bio can be accepted it must meet this requirement. A paragraph consists of 4-5 solid sentences. Just try to be more detailed on each little fact about your character, this will help bunches in making the bio longer. You really can't give enough detail on a bio. lol. And make sure to incorporate flaws, both in appearance and in personality and such. No body is perfect. XD

Also, it says he hates the Games, but he puts a lot into his Career training? Careers train to be in the Games and tend to enjoy them. So if you want to explain in the History how he's a career but hates the Games, that would be great. ^^

Keep plugging at it, bios can be tricky at first, but you'll get there.
Post here when you've fixed it.

~gxk