Soro Maora-D10

Hi soro!!!

Your appearance and history are pretty good :3 The only thing that I would suggest is that you separate them into paragraphs so we don't have to read a large block of text. You don't have to fix this right now, but for future reference you should do that :D

If you could add a bit more to personality, that would be awesome. Try finding some more character flaws, and expand on what you already have - I'm sure you'll find that Maora will be able to become an extremely well thought out character - I like him already :D

Just respond after you've edited and we'll take another look!