Violet Blue~District 7 (NOT FINISHED)

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Violet Blue~District 7 (NOT FINISHED) Sept 10, 2011 19:06:02 GMT -5

Post by BB on Sept 10, 2011 19:06:02 GMT -5

Hi let me be the first to welcome you to the site. You're character looks good so far but you need a bit more. The apperence should be at least 2 paragraphs and both Personality and histroy must be 3 each with each paragraph being at least 5-7 sentences long. I'd sugest adding WIP (Work in progess) into the topic's title so that the mods don't have to check here until your character is finished. Once you're done just change that WIP to compleat and reply to the topic so that the mods can conferm your character. I hope that helped and I hope to see you on the site.

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Violet Blue~District 7 (NOT FINISHED) Sept 10, 2011 19:30:53 GMT -5

Post by aya on Sept 10, 2011 19:30:53 GMT -5

Bowserboy: Thank you for trying to help, but we don't allow members to look over other members' apps here.

Engel: Welcome to the site! You're off to a good start, but you ought to spellcheck your post. Try copying the whole thing into a word processor and going through it; you have a fair bit of typos. Also, it would be better if you could linebreak between paragraphs (hit enter twice instead of once) as this helps to separate your text better.

As far as your history goes, she can't have siblings picked for the Hunger Games that year, as our site ran those Games (the 56th) and had tributes from District 7 (Hermione Easteallas and Johnathan Wrusche) so therefore your history does not match site cannon. You'll have to fix this whole segment of her history before she can be accepted. Make these changes and post again and someone else will look over your character and hopefully approve her!^^

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