Liam Berring -- D1

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Name: Liam Berring
Age: 17 1/2
Gender: Male
District/Area: {District 1|District 2|District 3|District 4|District 5|District 6|District 7|District 8|District 9|District 10|District 11|District 12|The Capitol|Wanderer|Avox}
Appearance:

Liam is a good looking young man; strong jaw line, generally muscular arms, toned body. He’s not overly hot or anything, but most girls or people would agree he’s good looking. His skin is fair, and not really tan. He’s 5’11” and weighs approx. 150 pounds. He’s talented with fencing and swords, for some reason, and generally does this while in Career training.

Liam’s hair is a light brown-ish color, cropped and short. His eyes are a deep brown that lighten or darken to portray his moods, and seem to melt like chocolate when he looks at you. His face very much resembles his father’s, and Liam has been told this many times. He has also been told he has his mother’s smile, sweet and kind.

Personality:

Liam generally keeps to himself, getting his work done and going to school and Career training. He’s really a sweet guy, looking for a friend (or friends) to have around.He’ll grow close and kind of attach to someone, once they’ve worked their way to them. Though he seems tough and hard to reach, once you’ve got to him, Liam will open up to you like a morning glory when the sun rises.

Liam had to deal with the loss of his mother, a generally rare occurrence in D1, at the age of seven, so that has contributed to his loneliness and hardness that seems to hang about him. This is his flaw, something that will always weaken him whenever mentioned. You can often find him staring into the distance, thinking intensely or remembering something saddening.

When he’s used to someone, Liam is very caring towards them and nice as well. But if you upset him, or lie to him, it might take a while to trust you again. Liam doesn’t tolerate people who are fake or who lie a lot. He hasn’t ever really been into love or relationships, but because he is caring he would probably do well in one.

History:

At the fragile age of seven, Liam’s mother contracted a nasty fever which turned to pneumonia and killed her. Liam was at his mother’s side, holding her hand as she whispered her last words to him. “Be a good boy, Liam.” She had told him, and he has followed those words to this day, staying out of trouble and whatnot. He wears her necklace around his own neck now, a way to always have her with him.

Liam is an only child who lives with his father, who isn’t generally around much. He trains to be a Career (or is basically forced to), incase his is reaped for the Hunger Games. His father and him are basically rich, but most people in District 1 are. He doesn’t flaunt this, but simply accepts it as the way he lives.

Liam has a dog named Stone, who’s an evolved version of a beagle and follows him around almost everywhere he can. Liam found him on the streets as a puppy and Stone just followed him home. He partially named in honor of District 1, but also because Liam discovered that Stone likes to chase rocks and stones if you throw them for him.

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

I’ll be using Drew Roy as his actor portrayal, as he is not in the face claim.

Thank you for the help! I have a hard time developing my characters well (as you can tell, haha). Here's the edited version!

Name: Liam Berring
Age: 17 1/2
Gender: Male
District/Area: {District 1|District 2|District 3|District 4|District 5|District 6|District 7|District 8|District 9|District 10|District 11|District 12|The Capitol|Wanderer|Avox}
Appearance:

Liam is a good looking young man; strong jaw line, generally muscular arms, toned body. He’s not overly hot or anything, but most girls or people would agree he’s good looking. His skin is fair, and not really tan. He’s 5’11” and weighs approximately 150 pounds, also having a lot of that being muscle from Career training. He’s talented with fencing and swords, for some reason, and generally does this while in training.

Liam’s hair is a light brown-ish color, cropped and short. His eyes are a deep brown that lighten or darken to portray his moods, and seem to melt like chocolate when he looks at you. His face very much resembles his father’s, and Liam has been told this many times. He has also been told he has his mother’s smile, sweet and kind.

Personality:
Liam can commonly be found be himself; getting his work done and going to school and Career training. Liam enjoys the thrill of thrusting the sword at his opponent and seeing his score go higher, showing that he is competitive. He’s really a sweet guy, looking for a friend (or friends) to have around. He’ll grow close and kind of attach to someone, once they’ve worked their way to them. Though he seems tough and hard to reach, once you’ve got to him, Liam will open up to you like a morning glory when the sun rises.

Liam had to deal with the loss of his mother, a generally rare occurrence in D1, at the age of seven, so that has contributed to his loneliness and hardness that seems to hang about him. His flaw is the mention of his mother or her death—it saddens him, reminding him of the night he lost her. Liam can become troubled or upset and even a little depressed sometimes. You can often find him staring into the distance, thinking intensely or remembering something saddening.

When he’s used to someone, Liam is very caring towards them and nice as well. But if you upset him, or lie to him, it might take a while to trust you again. He’s careful with his emotions, and won’t hand them out to just anyone. Liam doesn’t tolerate fictitious or lying people, which is most of District 1. So, you can figure that he hasn't been in any real relationship, but because he is so caring, he would most likely do well in one.
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History:

At the fragile age of seven, Liam’s mother contracted a nasty fever which turned to pneumonia and killed her. Liam was at his mother’s side, holding her hand as she whispered her last words to him. “Be a good boy, Liam.” She had told him, and he has followed those words to this day, staying out of trouble and whatnot. He wears her necklace around his own neck now, a way to always have her with him.

Liam is an only child who lives with his father, who isn’t generally around much. He trains to be a Career (or is basically forced to), incase his is reaped for the Hunger Games. Liam’s father is proud to say that his son is a Career Trainee, and pushes Liam to work hard at it, which is why in his spare time Liam is usually training. His father and him are basically rich, but most people in District 1 are. Liam doesn’t flaunt this, but simply accepts it as the way he lives.

Liam has a dog named Stone, who’s an evolved version of a beagle and follows him around almost everywhere he can. Liam found him on the streets as a puppy and Stone just followed him home. He partially named in honor of District 1, but also because Liam discovered that Stone likes to chase rocks and stones if you throw them for him. Once the dog even tried to follow him to school, and Liam had to lock him up at home. At school, Liam mostly keeps to himself, not having any really good friends, but just sort of being associated with a group of people he doesn’t really know all that well. Not that Liam wouldn’t like friends, he just doesn’t really have them.

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

I’ll be using Drew Roy as his actor portrayal, as he is not in the face claim.