Holly Narson, district 12

Very sorry for the wait you had to go through. Work has been piled onto the staff recently, and I had a personal issue (and a problem of being tired) for the past few weeks. I apologize greatly.

Now, I will need to direct you to this guide and take a look at points #1, #2 (History; as the other sections don't have complete sentences), #6, and #24. You need to have, at least, two paragraphs (five sentences minimum) in Appearance and three each for Personality and History.

And if you don't know already, please put a space between paragraphs for better organization, an easier time to read, and etc. ^^

Just on a realism note, I don't think your character would be that fast on fighting or weapon-wielding. There's more to it than just swinging...

Modify your first post with the necessary changes and reply back to the thread to notify that you're ready for another go. Thanks.

hunger Games note: It's not wrong for you (the user/RPer) to want to be entered in the Hunger Games, but we highly doubt that your character (from District 12) would want to, considering she is from a District that views the Hunger Games as death rather than a chance to strike it big. Also, we incorporate a fight system of dice and table; there really is no way to 'let others kill each other' or hide, since we do events which bring people out of their hiding spots; however, your character might think like what you said in-character.