James Hampton, Distirct 1(Done!)

Hey there! Here's a list of things I need you to fix so he can be accepted! :-D

- In some places you call him Cor or Corinth. I'm assuming this is a mistake?
- You kind of glorify all of his positive aspects. Could you sort of tone down the "Oh, he's good-looking and great" parts and give him some flaws? They make characters seem more human, and more likable at times. Characters that are too good are a lot of the time bothersome.
- Dirtbiking, snowboarding, and collecting live animals (other than simple pets -- I don't know what you were going for there) wouldn't be available in D1.
- His parents couldn't be billionaires, and they couldn't have had oil.
- His "Alaskan Huskie" wouldn't be called an Alaskan Huskie. It would just be a big dog -- Alaska doesn't exist.
- Unless he's a Career, he can't be ready for the Games. His attributes might make him likable for the Capitol, but really that could be said about any character.

I think that's it. :-D Post here when you're done editing!