Ivy Green District 11 (FIN)

Next time you complete a WIP, post again to bump it up to the top of the board so that it doesn't get lost a few pages back^^

So you've got a good base here, and there are just a few things I'm going to correct^^ First of all, three paragraphs for personality are required, so could you please add another? It can be about anything you want; expand on something you already said, maybe, or add a whole new trait! Five sentences minimum.

Usually we don't correct spelling and grammar, but there are a few errors I want to point out that will help you to improve your writing in the future^^ In the appearance, 'self conchess' is actually spelled 'self conscious', for future reference. And in the history, when use possessives like "Ivys best friends" or "sisters name" you're going to have to make those contractions, so "Ivy's" and "sister's". Maybe just go through and find where you've done it to fix it^^

Once you've corrected those things, post back here and one of us will look it over again!