Cameron Whisper- District One

I'm a little confused because at one point you mentioned her being from the Capitol originally? If that's true, you'll need to go into much more detail about that and how she ended up in District One training as a Career. Otherwise, I'm afraid you'll need to edit both that and her appearance, seeing as how even in District One, she wouldn't be able to alter her appearance in such an extreme way, particularly the change in her eye color (that kind of technology would only be available to Capitolites).

Also, you mention her jumping off a cliff at one point? That's kind of a big deal. How is she not dead? You should explain that a bit more, it's a little too much for an offhand statement.

Post here when you've edited and one of us will take another look! ^^