Ashleigh Musherl Avox

Hey there!

We require 2 paragraphs for appearance, 3 for personality, and 3 for history. A paragraph should be at least 5 sentences.

Listing things like:

Hair: description, blah blah blah

Is not generally how we like bios done. We prefer them done in solid paragraphs containing a lot of detail about your character. Please go back and add more detail to each section. Build up what ideas you've got and then add new ones. There are so many things you can share about your charry, the more the better.

Post here when you've made changes.