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gxk
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When in doubt flail it out

Cassie Willow Capitol May 9, 2012 19:57:38 GMT -5

Post by gxk on May 9, 2012 19:57:38 GMT -5

Hey there!

This is looking pretty good but I want to ask you to do a few things before she is accepted:

*Add a bit more detail to each section, the more you can say the better.

*In personality I want to see more personality. There are things in there that are more facts about her than personality traits. Such as she paints like it is her sport.

*And for history I want more of a life story. You've kind of only got little little kid, 8 years old, and recent. That leaves a lot of gaps in 14 years. Try to give her more of a story and tell us more about what her life has been like.

natsmycat Merchant [M:-200] 105 POSTS last seen Mar 31, 2013 9:39:37 GMT -5	Cassie Willow Capitol May 10, 2012 18:02:45 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by natsmycat on May 10, 2012 18:02:45 GMT -5 What the... it's gone! oh well, I'll make a new one that's even better!(gr I hate how positive I am)
	The cat came came back the very next day! (or the day after, I'm getting kinda lazy.)

Baby Wessex d9 [earthling] Administrator 9,572 POSTS Pronouns: She/Her last seen Sept 22, 2024 22:48:24 GMT -5 cameron stood in line for an hour for a stupid ride for me <3 best <3	Cassie Willow Capitol May 12, 2012 17:26:07 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Baby Wessex d9 [earthling] on May 12, 2012 17:26:07 GMT -5 Bizarre o.o Did you happen to create another one?
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