{The} Start Of {Something} New (Eliza, Sher)
Aug 8, 2012 14:28:13 GMT -5
Post by Tom on Aug 8, 2012 14:28:13 GMT -5
Lyrics Actions/Descriptions Speaking Other's Speaking Thoughts
Staring blankly ahead
Just making my way
Making a way
Through the crowd
Just making my way
Making a way
Through the crowd
Remo walked along the gutter of the street. He was tiresome from all the training and lack of sleep. He hadn't been sleeping because an image stuck in his head. That image was of the day his brother died. He remembered every detail from that day.
That day started out like every day in the Moreno house. They had woken up to the alarm that played in every room. Remo had been up faster than he could go. His brother woke up at the same time. They had got dressed. They ran to the kitchen and got they're breakfast. They had swiftly ate because your never supposed to be late to training in the Moreno house. Remo had finished before his brother. He went outside to the sparring area. His partner was a male, who looked much bigger than him. Remo was pretty good with a sword. He had used it every day and it seemed to be his best weapon yet. His brother finally got outside and had to wait to get a sparring partner. Remo had lunged at the guy, but the guy blocked. Then the guy he was sparring with had swung Remo's sword way high in the air. Remo was going to be defeated, but then Remo jumped dodging the sword slash the guy did. He caught his own sword when it came down. He had dodged another swing. He swung himself and it hit the guy in the arm. He was bleeding. Remo had stopped shocked. Then all the Moreno's surrounded him and all were surprised. All he did was hurt the guy. The guy swung his sword at Remo. He had dodged and slashed back in fear of getting hurt. He had stabbed the guy in the stomach, killing him. Remo gasped. He had just killed someone for the first time. Then the coach for sparring sent his little brother into the ring with him. The crowd had cleared and went back to what they were doing. Remo had been scared now. He really just killed someone. he began to spar with his brother. His brother's sword was too heavy for him. He watched as his brother swung for him, but instead the sword collapsed into the air. His brother screamed. Remo tried getting to him, but the sword had flung too fast downwards. It had pierced his brother. He got to him and held him. He cried. His brother died in his arms. That day he vowed that he would never hurt anyone. He later got whipped for killing his brother and the other guy. He still had the scars from that day.
Remo began to cry as he walked next to the gutter. He had his guitar strung to his back. Tears slid down his face slowly. The sky may have been bright, but Remo's sky was dark. He stared up at the sky as he walked. His brother was up there somewhere...somewhere good. He knew his family was watching over him right now. He knew they could probably see the tears in his eyes. He didn't care. He need to stop crying. He pulled out a pack of cigarettes. He took one out and lit it. He felt better now. He smoked it, until it was done. Then he threw it on the ground. He made it to the town square. People began whispering stuff behind his back, thinking he wouldn't hear."Didn't that guy get whipped for killing two people." "He is a druggie. Steer clear from him." "He is the worst kid ever." "He has no friends." "I heard he will kill you if you just look at him."
He had enough of this. He was done with all the whispers, but he couldn't do anything about it... A lot of them were the truth. He clenched his fists and just kept making his way through the crowd. He finally broke free from the crowd. He had made it to the center. That's where he always was at this time. He sat right next to the fountain. The fountain was always a place of fun and good times, but now it was just his sorrows. This is the place he took his brother outside for the first time. This is the place he had his first kiss. This was the place he had made his first wish. Now this place was just the place of sadness and music playing. He pulled his guitar out. He began to sing. No one ever acknowledged him. He felt really sad. He knew no one ever wanted to talk to him. He sighed softly. He frowned at the ground. He stopped singing and just played his guitar. He really had no idea what was next in his life. He had kept playing slower now. He finally gave up on the music now. He sat there just looking at the people passing by. He put his head down and began to pray to his family in the sky.Why did this have to happen to us... Its hard to keep going without you all. I should have realized what happened brother.... Mom, I really miss your cooking... Dad, I miss your scoldings.... Mother, Father, I should have listened to you when you told me that girl was bad....I miss you all... I never thought that anything like this could happen in seconds... but it did..... and now I miss you all so much... If I could see you all just once.... I would.... I would just tell you all how much I missed you... Love you Mom... I love you Dad... I love you Brother.....Talk to you guys later...
[/size][/color]That day started out like every day in the Moreno house. They had woken up to the alarm that played in every room. Remo had been up faster than he could go. His brother woke up at the same time. They had got dressed. They ran to the kitchen and got they're breakfast. They had swiftly ate because your never supposed to be late to training in the Moreno house. Remo had finished before his brother. He went outside to the sparring area. His partner was a male, who looked much bigger than him. Remo was pretty good with a sword. He had used it every day and it seemed to be his best weapon yet. His brother finally got outside and had to wait to get a sparring partner. Remo had lunged at the guy, but the guy blocked. Then the guy he was sparring with had swung Remo's sword way high in the air. Remo was going to be defeated, but then Remo jumped dodging the sword slash the guy did. He caught his own sword when it came down. He had dodged another swing. He swung himself and it hit the guy in the arm. He was bleeding. Remo had stopped shocked. Then all the Moreno's surrounded him and all were surprised. All he did was hurt the guy. The guy swung his sword at Remo. He had dodged and slashed back in fear of getting hurt. He had stabbed the guy in the stomach, killing him. Remo gasped. He had just killed someone for the first time. Then the coach for sparring sent his little brother into the ring with him. The crowd had cleared and went back to what they were doing. Remo had been scared now. He really just killed someone. he began to spar with his brother. His brother's sword was too heavy for him. He watched as his brother swung for him, but instead the sword collapsed into the air. His brother screamed. Remo tried getting to him, but the sword had flung too fast downwards. It had pierced his brother. He got to him and held him. He cried. His brother died in his arms. That day he vowed that he would never hurt anyone. He later got whipped for killing his brother and the other guy. He still had the scars from that day.
Remo began to cry as he walked next to the gutter. He had his guitar strung to his back. Tears slid down his face slowly. The sky may have been bright, but Remo's sky was dark. He stared up at the sky as he walked. His brother was up there somewhere...somewhere good. He knew his family was watching over him right now. He knew they could probably see the tears in his eyes. He didn't care. He need to stop crying. He pulled out a pack of cigarettes. He took one out and lit it. He felt better now. He smoked it, until it was done. Then he threw it on the ground. He made it to the town square. People began whispering stuff behind his back, thinking he wouldn't hear."Didn't that guy get whipped for killing two people." "He is a druggie. Steer clear from him." "He is the worst kid ever." "He has no friends." "I heard he will kill you if you just look at him."
He had enough of this. He was done with all the whispers, but he couldn't do anything about it... A lot of them were the truth. He clenched his fists and just kept making his way through the crowd. He finally broke free from the crowd. He had made it to the center. That's where he always was at this time. He sat right next to the fountain. The fountain was always a place of fun and good times, but now it was just his sorrows. This is the place he took his brother outside for the first time. This is the place he had his first kiss. This was the place he had made his first wish. Now this place was just the place of sadness and music playing. He pulled his guitar out. He began to sing. No one ever acknowledged him. He felt really sad. He knew no one ever wanted to talk to him. He sighed softly. He frowned at the ground. He stopped singing and just played his guitar. He really had no idea what was next in his life. He had kept playing slower now. He finally gave up on the music now. He sat there just looking at the people passing by. He put his head down and began to pray to his family in the sky.Why did this have to happen to us... Its hard to keep going without you all. I should have realized what happened brother.... Mom, I really miss your cooking... Dad, I miss your scoldings.... Mother, Father, I should have listened to you when you told me that girl was bad....I miss you all... I never thought that anything like this could happen in seconds... but it did..... and now I miss you all so much... If I could see you all just once.... I would.... I would just tell you all how much I missed you... Love you Mom... I love you Dad... I love you Brother.....Talk to you guys later...
Remo sat there looking down at the ground. Tears pouring from his eyes. He stopped and took out a cigarette. He lit it and smoked it. He threw it on the ground and smashed it. He went back to playing his guitar. He crossed his feet comfortably. The thing he didn't know was that, he was about to meet someone... [/size][/size][/color][/center]
If I could fall
Into the sky
Do you think time
Would pass me by
'Cause you know I'd walk
A thousand miles
If I could
Just see you
Tonight
Into the sky
Do you think time
Would pass me by
'Cause you know I'd walk
A thousand miles
If I could
Just see you
Tonight
( Here is the song XD www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cwkej79U3ek This post was 1001 words long XD)