Roselyn Amirie District 13

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Roselyn Amirie District 13 Apr 22, 2012 21:25:33 GMT -5

Post by aya on Apr 22, 2012 21:25:33 GMT -5

Hi and welcome! We require a minimum of 2 paragraphs in appearance and 3 paragraphs each in personality and history. You need one more paragraph in personality and your paragraphs in history are looking short (they should be a minimum of 5 solid sentences each) and need to be fleshed out a bit more more before someone can accept her.

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certified kindergartener
stranded in "beach" "city"
leader of the crystal gems

mcmarti99 guest	Roselyn Amirie District 13 Apr 26, 2012 21:37:34 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by mcmarti99 on Apr 26, 2012 21:37:34 GMT -5 I changed a few things, added some new and or improved details, hope you like it! Thank you for your suggestions!

Baby Wessex d9 [earthling] Administrator 9,572 POSTS Pronouns: She/Her last seen Sept 22, 2024 22:48:24 GMT -5 cameron stood in line for an hour for a stupid ride for me <3 best <3	Roselyn Amirie District 13 May 3, 2012 9:28:36 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Baby Wessex d9 [earthling] on May 3, 2012 9:28:36 GMT -5 [/size][/ul]
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mcmarti99 guest	Roselyn Amirie District 13 May 3, 2012 15:39:06 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by mcmarti99 on May 3, 2012 15:39:06 GMT -5 There you go! Thanks! -Maddy