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pika
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Kami Grace Hargrove, District 4 May 6, 2012 18:37:14 GMT -5

Post by pika on May 6, 2012 18:37:14 GMT -5

Hi there, Lauren!

If you wouldn't mind, could you please separate your paragraphs for me? It makes it easier for me to see how many paragraphs you've written. Also, you need a little bit more in your Personality and History sections. You have the right number of paragraphs, but they are a bit short; try explaining a little more, and you'll have them in no time!

Go ahead and post when you've edited so I can check it again! (:

arise and be all that you dreamed

lauren48 Seam Resident 4 POSTS last seen May 12, 2012 15:23:28 GMT -5	Kami Grace Hargrove, District 4 May 7, 2012 15:56:34 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by lauren48 on May 7, 2012 15:56:34 GMT -5 I tried to indent but it edited the indents out, sorry. And I re-read this and saw how bad this was, I actually made a new one so I'll upload it soon, it's a lot better, I promise!
	Last Edit: May 7, 2012 17:05:48 GMT -5 by lauren48