An Ideal Chapter: Comments and thoughts wanted!
Jan 8, 2010 18:22:38 GMT -5
Post by The Source on Jan 8, 2010 18:22:38 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but I think you watched the Castle series a but too much. The storyline is exactly the same as it.
But apart from that, when the General yells HOLLY CRAP, i'd change that to, like, something a guy his age would say, like, oh my god or something.
But it was good
But apart from that, when the General yells HOLLY CRAP, i'd change that to, like, something a guy his age would say, like, oh my god or something.
But it was good
