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Tacool Dec 14, 2012 14:54:34 GMT -5

Post by tacool on Dec 14, 2012 14:54:34 GMT -5

Name: Diogo
Age: 16
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 5
Appearance:

Medium height, medium weight brown colured hair brown eyes really tanned

Personality:

independent survivalist, lethal, but good at thinking outside the boxpast natural survivors often ignorant of other people´s emotions

History:

Has a very bad family, though is from the energy district wants to be a lawyer because doesn´t like it

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

Baby Wessex d9 [earthling]
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cameron stood in line for an hour for a stupid ride for me <3 best <3

Tacool Dec 14, 2012 15:01:49 GMT -5

Post by Baby Wessex d9 [earthling] on Dec 14, 2012 15:01:49 GMT -5

[/u] five complete sentences per paragraph, not fragments. The appearance section for Diogo needs to be two paragraphs. The personality and history sections need to be three paragraphs each.

I'm also not sure Panem has lawyers. Doesn't seem like something President Snow would like very much xD What other profession could he have?

Good job getting the code word correct ^^

Post a reply back here when you've lengthened and strengthened this bio![/size][/ul]