My Cover of Rue's Lullaby

aimee Seam Resident 24 POSTS last seen Sept 4, 2010 12:08:37 GMT -5	My Cover of Rue's Lullaby Jan 26, 2010 1:32:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by aimee on Jan 26, 2010 1:32:37 GMT -5 Okay, so I really want legitimate feedback. Don't be all nice about it. I want harsh critiques. It's how I improve. It's what I'm used to from my Choir director... Basically. BE MEAN. I can take it. THANKSSS! =D

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My Cover of Rue's Lullaby Jan 26, 2010 18:12:58 GMT -5

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Post by Tori on Jan 26, 2010 18:12:58 GMT -5

You said be harsh,
luckily, it's something I'm good at.

1. Your sound like your singing from your throat, not your head. Use your diaphram girl! Make your voice sound a little more mature. If you sing from your head, you won't get parts that sound like your voice isn't at the level it should be.

2. Sing the entire sound with the same passion. There seemed to be a few moments when you seemed to be more passionate about on part than another.

3. I heard some flats notes, work on that. Also try to round your voice a lot. I find if you do your scales over and over just trying to round your voice it helps a little.

4. At one part it seemed like you were really stretching your voice. And you shouldn't do that. Make sure you take deep enough breaths, and your sure about the note your going to hit next.

Okay.
I think that's enough critizism for one day.
Other than that, I think your voice could be lovely(:
(not that it isn't already)

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My Cover of Rue's Lullaby Jan 26, 2010 22:45:09 GMT -5

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Post by WT on Jan 26, 2010 22:45:09 GMT -5

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That was beautiful.

Seriously, beautiful as in I'm converting the video file to mp3 and putting it on my mp3 player.

I do agree with Tori, though- several times I noticed you seemed to be running on your last dregs of air, and your voice suffered for it. (I think those bits are where you hit most of your flat notes, as well.) A cleaner recording may also help, though I know that can be hard to accomplish. Darn recording devices. DX

I must ask- did you write the music, or is it adapted from something, or is it existing music for Rue's Lullaby that's on some site somewhere that I don't know about? Just curious. 'Cause whoever composed this, both the piano and the melody, is totally my hero. \o/

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Tori Retired Staff 1,071 POSTS last seen May 7, 2013 21:56:19 GMT -5 Pigfarts, Pigfarts, yum, yum, yum.	My Cover of Rue's Lullaby Jan 26, 2010 22:57:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tori on Jan 26, 2010 22:57:01 GMT -5 It is called 'Kiss the rain' by Yiruma he's my hero, here's the actual 'first' rue's lullaby video. (: The song wasn't written for it, it just happened to fit very nicely. www.youtube.com/watch?v=uCmoAuZgsnE
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