Jake Macyntare: Avox
Sept 23, 2010 18:56:17 GMT -5
Post by davy on Sept 23, 2010 18:56:17 GMT -5
Darkness. That was the first thing that his mind registered. Not the natural darkness that you get at night in the forest. Jake was used to that darkness. It comforted him and reminded him of home. This darkness was more dense. More suffocating. Almost like the total darkness of a cave. Jake hated this darkness. It wasn't what might lay ahead in the darkness that frightened him. It was just the absolute blackness of it all. It made him feel like he was suffocating.
As his eyes started to adjust he could see a door. He noticed all the light entering the room was coming from the door. It wasn't the door to his cell in the detention center. He then noticed it also wasn't the door to the interrogation room. Then he realized he must be home. That had to be it. He must have simply dreamed that he was in prison. His mom had shut the door and closed the curtains to keep the light out."What a dream." He tried to say to himself. No sound came from his lips. Then the horrible memories came back to him.
A peacekeeper and entered his cell with a knife. Three more had chained him to something, but he wasn't sure what. He struggled for freedom. The peacekeeper raised the knife. It went into Jake's mouth. He felt intense pain. The most intense he had ever felt. Then all at once it was lights out Jake.
He realized he was an avox. He would never see Bella, Zach, or his mother again. The only good feeling he had was that Bella had escaped this fate. At least she could tell his mother and Zach he was alive. They had taken her away from him, and so close to their wedding. Now sadness swept over him.
After a while he realized that he was probably about to be bought by some rich Capitol person. He wasn't going to look like he had just been crying. If this would be the rest of his life then he might as well make a good first impression. He wiped his face from the tears. Put a cocky arrogant look on his face and leaned against the wall waiting for the door to open to his new life.
Anyone who wants Jake can have him. Just don't abuse him too badly he's still my favorite character.
As his eyes started to adjust he could see a door. He noticed all the light entering the room was coming from the door. It wasn't the door to his cell in the detention center. He then noticed it also wasn't the door to the interrogation room. Then he realized he must be home. That had to be it. He must have simply dreamed that he was in prison. His mom had shut the door and closed the curtains to keep the light out."What a dream." He tried to say to himself. No sound came from his lips. Then the horrible memories came back to him.
A peacekeeper and entered his cell with a knife. Three more had chained him to something, but he wasn't sure what. He struggled for freedom. The peacekeeper raised the knife. It went into Jake's mouth. He felt intense pain. The most intense he had ever felt. Then all at once it was lights out Jake.
He realized he was an avox. He would never see Bella, Zach, or his mother again. The only good feeling he had was that Bella had escaped this fate. At least she could tell his mother and Zach he was alive. They had taken her away from him, and so close to their wedding. Now sadness swept over him.
After a while he realized that he was probably about to be bought by some rich Capitol person. He wasn't going to look like he had just been crying. If this would be the rest of his life then he might as well make a good first impression. He wiped his face from the tears. Put a cocky arrogant look on his face and leaned against the wall waiting for the door to open to his new life.
Anyone who wants Jake can have him. Just don't abuse him too badly he's still my favorite character.