Mylee District 12

Unfortunately, you did not listen to my directions. Therefore, I can't accept her.

Mylee's bio is not written in full sentences, nor is Mylee's bio the minimum length. Please revise this so I can look at it and not have to reject it off the bat xP

Okay, thank you^^

You still need another paragraph in history, and your personality has a bit too many skills and not enough actual traits. Try stemming traits from her talents - maybe her ability to climb well makes her feel superior to others, etc.? There's a lot that you can expand on this, and I can't wait to read it!

You can always just click edit on the first bio and edit that accordingly. You don't need to post a new bio each time. Just respond when you've edited and we'll get back to you!

Hi!

Looking at Mylee's personality, here's what I can gather:

- quiet
- calm
- independent
- sweet
- occasionally violent
- creative/imaginative

I'd like you to give her another negative personality trait, for I feel that she has too many positive traits in ratio to her negative trait. Besides, negative traits help make a character more interesting :DD It's so much fun to mess around with things and see what you'll get!