Mayzie Bartholomew--District 8 FINISHED

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Mayzie Bartholomew--District 8 FINISHED Jun 29, 2013 14:36:26 GMT -5

Post by zakattack on Jun 29, 2013 14:36:26 GMT -5

Name: Mayzie Bartholomew
Age: 16
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 8
Appearance:

Personality:

Mayzie McGrew ran night and day,
Nowhere to go, nowhere to stay.
Because she was sure that everyone must
have written her off in total disgust,
over and over again in her head,
These are the words that poor Mayzie said:
"I can never go home. Nobody loves me. Nobody loves me."

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Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

This is for the library plot. Dr. Seuss style.

Last Edit: Jul 29, 2013 16:07:09 GMT -5 by zakattack

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Mayzie Bartholomew--District 8 FINISHED Jul 24, 2013 14:35:20 GMT -5

Post by zakattack on Jul 24, 2013 14:35:20 GMT -5

Mayzie McGrew ran night and day,
Nowhere to go, nowhere to stay.
Because she was sure that everyone must
have written her off in total disgust,
over and over again in her head,
These are the words that poor Mayzie said:
"I can never go home. Nobody loves me. Nobody loves me."

They say that Mayzie was a girl you’d love to know
Her long red hair often tied in a bow.
Oh wasn’t that the only way to go
Silly little Mayzie with her blue eyes all a glow.
Doesn’t she know this is all a show?

You could tell her her freckles are too dark and intense
But nothing you do would help her make sense
The freckles and spots all covering her face
Are nothing more than a small little taste
Of what make Mayzie’s little heart race.

She has plump little lips that often pull down,
Her big doe eyes the reflection of a frown
The way she judges most is written across her eyes
Their fakeness, their false words all filled with lies
She can’t even be bothered to hide it with guise.

Her body was curvy in all the right spots
But none of that mattered to the boys who loved her lots
Instead they focused on the flaws you could see
Like the width of her nose or her knobby knees.
It was hard for her to let go of the fears
That had been installed after all these years.

She wasn’t sure she was beautiful
More like something called cutie-ful.
And it pained her to think that she would never be
As pretty as her mother wanted her to be.
Her insecurities abound
Kept Mayzie all the more with her mind off the ground

Some would say that Mazie was mean
But truthfully that just wasn’t her scene
She didn’t have time to care what you thought
Instead she just slept around a lot
Her falseness and brooding gave her much angst
Though her sadness drove to her live without haste

She was picky and pervasive
When she got in your brain
Sticking there and rolling around
Practically driving you in sane
She wanted to know what made people tick
Even if she thought about beating them with a stick.

It was hard to say what made Mayzie go
She was curious and mischievous like no one would know
Devious in ways that women enjoyed
But it wasn’t like she didn’t like boys
Mayzie was free with who she was
In life, in love, and all that she does.

Growing up an orphan with no one to care
No one to explain where she got her red hair
made Mayzie some what forget full with her head in the clouds
never following rules that of what was allowed
she didn't behave like the others its true
she was different just like me and you

years went by in the community home
she spent writing and painting and living alone
her fear of death wasn't alive
she knew already how to survive
she was fostered and shipped from family to family
Each ones sending her back screaming Family Schmamily!

No one loved her the way she wanted
she grew up feeling like she was haunted
by the ghost of a girl who should've been happy
someone who wasn't so totally crappy.
For years she wished she could open up and smile
instead she developed her own style.

She spent the years finding her way
growing and creating the persona she has today
Its a coverage of who she really is.
The scared little girl behind the bangs whirls and whizz
The mask she wears like a badge of honor
To hid the pain of losing her mother and father.

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Last Edit: Jul 29, 2013 16:05:45 GMT -5 by zakattack

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Mayzie Bartholomew--District 8 FINISHED Jul 29, 2013 16:06:48 GMT -5

Post by zakattack on Jul 29, 2013 16:06:48 GMT -5

Okay I think she's done. I know its hard to understand because she's written like this but she's Dr. Seuss style for the Library plot and I'm having so much trouble with it. Basically Mayzie is an orphan who hates everyone and finds comfort with boys. Sorry if its awful.

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Mayzie Bartholomew--District 8 FINISHED Jul 30, 2013 2:02:41 GMT -5

Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2013 2:02:41 GMT -5

I really love this. Great job!

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