Lavender, District 2

Hey there! ^^

So far you have done a fab job with Lauren's bio, she is looking like a great character so far, but I'm going to need you to beef up those paragraphs just a little bit more! Try to keep in mind that a paragraph contains a minimum of five sentences per paragraph.

If you are struggling with trying to add more detail you could read lots and lots of amazing tutorials on how to help you out. HERE, is a fabulous guide on how to create a character. Elegant wrote this, and she used an amazing amount of detail that will help you to beef up those paragraphs you have! I seriously recommend reading that guide, it will give you a step by step breakdown of how to make a detailed, realistic character! Another great guide is THIS one by Thundy, she gives you some great tips of the biggest does and don'ts for your bio!

Okay, so try and beef up those lovely paragraphs just a little bit more! Once you have done that reply back here and another staff member will take a look. <3