Gaston Lee Mercer | District 2 [WIP]

Hey there! ^^

Okay so, you have a good start to a bio here. Just a few issues need to be addressed before he can be accepted:

-- The FC you have is way too young, like way too young. You need to change either the FC or the age of the boy. It is completely implausible for a seventeen year old to look like he is eight.
-- Okay so in his personality you have this boy who goes suddenly from a ruthless killer to a happy little boy. It isn't how a person works. Unless they have some mental disorder like schizophrenia (and even then it wouldn't work into your plot line as it is a mental disorder).
-- It would be better to have something alone the lines of a boy, perhaps with a few anger issues and he learns to sort them out, but in your bio you have gone from one extreme to the next, which is unrealistic.

Okay so, you need to fix either is FC (that means changing the appearance completely) or fix his age. As well as that you need to dial it down a bit, a lot of what you have in his history is very contradictory to his personality. Okay so make these few changes and post back here when you have edited ^^