Paul District 1

Hey there, Paul! It's great to see that you have had a go at making a character.

So far you have done a fab job with Paul's bio, he is looking like a great character so far, but I'm going to need you to beef up those paragraphs just a little bit more! Remember that your bio must contain two paragraphs for appearance, three for history and three for personality. Try to keep in mind that a paragraph contains a minimum of five sentences per paragraph.

If you are struggling with trying to add more detail you could read lots and lots of amazing tutorials on how to help you out. HERE, is a fabulous guide on how to create a character. Elegant wrote this, and she used an amazing amount of detail that will help you to beef up those paragraphs you have! I seriously recommend reading that guide, it will give you a step by step breakdown of how to make a detailed, realistic character! Another great guide is THIS one by Thundy, she gives you some great tips of the biggest does and don'ts for your bio!

We don't allow district's to hunt, the primary reason for this being the Capitol wouldn't allow them to carry around weapons like that and wonder the forests nearby to get food. ^^

Okay, so try and beef up those lovely paragraphs just a little bit more! Once you have done that reply back here and another staff member will take a look.

<3 Cass