Onyx Chaffon (D1) DONE

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Onyx Chaffon (D1) DONE Jan 7, 2014 0:41:53 GMT -5

Post by HeartsForeverTogether on Jan 7, 2014 0:41:53 GMT -5

Name: Onyx Chaffon
Age: 17
Gender: Female
District/Area: One
Appearance:

Personality:

Manipulative, Cocky, Fierce

History:

History Text here (3 paragraphs please

Codeword: Odair
Other:Face Claim is Naomi Watts

Will have full bio up soon.

Last Edit: Feb 3, 2014 7:23:01 GMT -5 by HeartsForeverTogether

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Onyx Chaffon (D1) DONE Jan 7, 2014 12:29:40 GMT -5

Post by HeartsForeverTogether on Jan 7, 2014 12:29:40 GMT -5

Onyx is a fairly skinny girl, but it was not always like that. She used to be borderline obese weighing in at one hundred forty pounds at age ten. She was five foot three at the time. That all changed when her parents encouraged her to sign up for the career program. When she went in the training center for the first time everybody laughed at her and she believed them. They were so perfect and she was just not. When she got home she lied to her parents and said she had a good day. She started almost starving her self from that point on, feeding her self little more than what she needed to survive.

Her skin is a pale with some freckles on her arms and legs but almost none on her face. The pimples on her are almost faded but you can still see the remains of the past. The past that she so much tries to hide is still there and she can't cover it up. She could with makeup but one part of her wants to hold on to the past. Even though she wasn't as pretty and deadly then, she was happier. She was happy in her own world and in her own right. Now she worries about peoples opinions on her appearance.

Her blonde hair has a few brown highlights in them. Her hair was originally all brown but she dyed it because the girls at the training center said it made her look cool. As you can see she is very influenced on others opinions and will want to do anything to make others happy. Though, she left the brown in her hair to keep hold of the past. The shape of her hair is almost never held and is easily tangled. Her almond shaped eyes have blue color contacts hiding their true color, hazel. They show that even if she wants to remember the past she has left it behind.

The shape of her face is one of a square. On it is a pair of light brown, medium-thick eyebrows. Her nose bridge shape runs in the family and is clear and present in every blood Chaffon. A dark pink color goes over her lips. Something that she actually prides herself in is her strait teeth. They are almost perfect except one half of her left canine is gone. It got knock of during the year of the sixty-third hunger games. She has one piercing on the top of her right ear. The piercing is medium size.

She has a dancer's fingers as all of her friends say. They are nimble and able to throw a knife with it easily. The only thing is that her right index finger is cut off at the knuckle. One person during her first week of training bullied her and cut it off. People still give her those weird glances, and always will. The fingernails on them are medium long in length. Her arms have some muscle on it but she's not like the "Hulk" or anything like that. Her legs are the same way. They aren't extremely muscled but she's not scrawny.

She also just got a case of frostbite on her left ear during the winter of the sixty-fifth hunger games. It is a moderate to severe case. It will heal but probably after two or three years of healing without further damage.

Onyx's main positive trait is that she is determined. When she started "dieting" she knew she wanted to stop but she needed to lose the weight so she kept going. With this comes her being diligent. She is diligent to mostly herself and some of her closest friends but none of her enemies. This gives her a point of intelligence, knowing when to strike and when to hide and wait it out.

She is also persistent, if she fails at something once she will try and try again. While I put this is the positive section this can sometimes get her into trouble. Once she tries to get someone on her side more then a couple times, it can get annoying. The person will soon hate her and trigger some of her anxiety (to be mentioned later.) This also will trigger some of her rage issues (also mentioned later).

Unlike most people in district one she is a bit unpatriotic. This can obviously bad because if the peace keepers found out, well... she wouldn't want to find out what would happen. It can be good because she's not afraid to do anything that will be "anti capitalistic", unless there's any peace keepers around of course. This can make her get friends and lose friends, so therefore it's a neutral trait.

She is also fairly aggressive, which can also be either good or bad. It can be good because she could stand up for her friends and not even think about it before punching the person in the jaw. It could also make her feared, and being feared never ever helps a persons image... at all. It's not always a bad thing though, and can make her a tougher person to beat.

She thinks she is schizophrenic and she very well may be. She hears two voices, one of her current self and one of her old self. She also sees some hallucinations, an example is when she throws and axe at a dummy she starts to see it turn into a person before she turns away. This can sometimes blur her thoughts but not all of the time. Also can mess with her positive thoughts.

Onyx also has a slight anxiety issue. She misses anyone she hurts instantly and wants to be there friend. This can mess with her aggressiveness and rage some... but she gets attacks after about and hour of anxiety.

Now I'm not going to talk on and on about how tragic her obese childhood was, because it wasn't. Sure, she did get picked on a bit, but she came home to a family who loved her. Her mother, Satin Chaffon, was a optimistic person who always made Onyx think on the bright side of things. Some people would say she blinded her from the truth, which I guess she did. Never the less she was happier that way.

During her single digit years she was homeschooled along with her siblings. She has two older twin sisters, Jade and Diamond, that always did everything together. This included their classes. Even though they left her out of a lot of things, they were her best friends. She never had any real friends until she got to the training center. She had her mom, if that even counts.

During her life, she never really interacted with her dad. He was there for the other two, just not for her. To be fair he mother was closer to her but sometimes it seemed like he didn't even care about her. If she died he might notice, but that's it. It might be that he always thought that she was a disappointment to the family. In her opinion though, every body has someone in their family that doesn't like them, and to her it's her dad.

Behind her house is a little pond, her little pond. It is where she made her decision at age ten. There were two apparent choices, drowning herself or starving. She obviously chose the latter because I am writing this. During her early life, this pond didn't mean much. It was just a place to play, swim, or fish. She always found playing at home was a lot more fun than going to the mall with her sisters.

After she joined the training center, she made some real friends. Her best friend's name is Mae. She always wanted to quit the training center and to live her own life, but her parents wouldn't let her. She was her friend from the day Onyx joined and is still her friend. Onyx has other friends as well, but they all come and go.

Onyx overall loved her childhood. There was nothing to worry about at home, just her and her mother. Clothes were never any issue at all (she did have some though)because it was just them with no one else to see. When her life changed all of this changed, but it's not terrible. Though, sometimes Onyx feels like life would be better if she was a hermit in her little hole again.

Codeword-Odair

Last Edit: Feb 3, 2014 7:20:41 GMT -5 by HeartsForeverTogether

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Onyx Chaffon (D1) DONE Feb 9, 2014 8:01:29 GMT -5

Post by rook on Feb 9, 2014 8:01:29 GMT -5

Hi Hearts. You mention she is schizophrenic, which is a pretty big thing, yet you've only mentioned this in one paragraph. This is a condition that would effect her whole life. You need to be talking a lot more about it in your bio - Certainly more in personality, as it would effect how she treats people. You also need to talk about it in History - when it started and the extent to which it has worsened/improved.

Thanks!