Panem Post (97th Games ed.)

98th Hunger Games:
The arena locations and descriptions are out now! Check it out here!
The Gamemakers have been announced! See who'll be running the games here!

Your Newest Victor
Congratulations to Panem's 97th Hunger Games Victor: Seraphina Keoch of District Six - authored by Cait!

97th MVP
Give it up for Pogue, our 97th Games OOC MVP!

Retro Games: 10th Quell
Congratulations to Kasia Karataeva from District 3, played by Jorg, who outran the other tributes to escape the Capitol Sewers and secure her victory!

D6 Staff Strike
Sign up your characters to be involved in the District Six hospital staff strike. It's inevitable that any form of protest in Panem will surely spiral out of control. Which side of the picket line are you on?

D9 Bake-Off
Want to get on TV but don't feel like killing kids in order to do so? Audition for the District Nine Bake-Off!

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Ronnie Kinney
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last seen Mar 12, 2014 16:29:56 GMT -5

What's up i am new and i love to talk

I am Rush Banks Mar 11, 2014 16:22:29 GMT -5

Post by Ronnie Kinney on Mar 11, 2014 16:22:29 GMT -5

My name is Rush i am 16, i live in district 4. i have hazel eyes and i have dirty blond hair. i am 5 foot 10 inches and weigh 135.I have a rather medium size nose and slim eye brows with long eye lashes. I am tan and have a tight jaw line and can lift 145 pounds. I am very charming as i am strong i have a way with girls as i flash my mischievous smile. I prefer to wear tight clothing and water resistant. Girls love me and the guys are very jealous. I live in district 4 and i have a large tattoo of a trident on my right arm. I am very dramatic and fast but i am not as strong as others in my district. The girls and little kids love me because i am nice and easy going, the adults hate me because I am a "bad boy". I hate it when people get hurt and i will work harder when someone hurt my friends. My Dad died because he tried to rebel against the capitol and my mom is quite and takes care of my other chores/jobs while i charm people out of their money and beat people out of money so i can support my family. I am in the 10th grade and have few true friends.

cass
Retired Staff

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last seen Oct 24, 2021 18:11:43 GMT -5

I am Rush Banks Mar 13, 2014 8:53:05 GMT -5

Post by cass on Mar 13, 2014 8:53:05 GMT -5

Hey there, Ronnie! Welcome to the site ^^ It's great to see that you have had a go at making a character.

Rush's bio is looking good at the moment, you;ve got the bascis down pat, so woooo! I am going to have to ask you, however to beef those paras up some more. Remember that your bio must contain two paragraphs for appearance, three for history and three for personality. Try to keep in mind that a paragraph contains a minimum of five sentences per paragraph.

This site has a lot of amazing tutorials that will help you out if you are struggling to add more detail in your post. HERE, is a fabulous guide on how to create a character. Elegant wrote this, and she used an amazing amount of detail that will help you out. I highly recommend that you give that one a good read. It goes into great detail on how to make an excellent character, step by step guide. Another great guide is THIS one by Thundy, she gives you some great tips of the biggest does and don'ts for your bio!

Also you are missing the codeword which can be found in the rules if you go and read them ^^ Lastly could you go through your bio and do a grammar and punctuation check? Your sentences don't even begin with a Capital letter.

Okay, so try and beef up those lovely paragraphs just a little bit more! Once you have done that reply back here and another staff member will take a look.

<3 Cass