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kittyoemily Career Tribute 511 POSTS last seen Feb 17, 2018 18:06:28 GMT -5	IC Arlington district 11 - wip- May 10, 2014 14:16:13 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by kittyoemily on May 10, 2014 14:16:13 GMT -5 Wip yeah I may have forced a first person bio when it should have been a third sorry. My mistake.
	Last Edit: May 11, 2014 8:15:18 GMT -5 by kittyoemily "Ah, District Two, you do breed some crazies xD" Quote-Kay- All time favorite quote ever^^

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IC Arlington district 11 - wip- May 11, 2014 0:36:04 GMT -5

Post by cass on May 11, 2014 0:36:04 GMT -5

Hiya Kitty!

So I have read through this entire bio -- and I have received the opinion from some other staff members and we all believe it would be for the best if you try and write this bio again. We have found it really confusing and in all honesty we don't understand what is going on, and perhaps that is our fault. But could you please just try and write this bio again, read through it and see if it all makes sense -- this entire bird concept is rather contradictory and confusing. If you need a hand at all to make this work, please, do not hesitate to PM me. I can even sit down and go through this with you completely and help you re-work this into something more appropriate. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh or rude -- it is not intended to be taken that way.

Thank you, and don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions <333

-- Cass