Kris Jones District 2

Hey there, Kris! Welcome to the site ^^ It's great to see that you have had a go at making a character.

I am going to have to ask you, however to beef those paras up some more. Remember that your bio must contain two paragraphs for appearance, three for history and three for personality. Try to keep in mind that a paragraph contains a minimum of five sentences per paragraph.

This site has a lot of amazing tutorials that will help you out if you are struggling to add more detail in your post. HERE, is a fabulous guide on how to create a character. Elegant wrote this, and she used an amazing amount of detail that will help you out. I highly recommend that you give that one a good read. It goes into great detail on how to make an excellent character, step by step guide. Another great guide is THIS one by Thundy, she gives you some great tips of the biggest does and don'ts for your bio!

Also you are missing the codeword which can be found in the rules if you go and read them ^^ Lastly could you go through your bio and do a grammar and punctuation check? Your sentences don't even begin with a Capital letter.

Okay, so try and beef up those lovely paragraphs just a little bit more! Once you have done that reply back here and another staff member will take a look.

<3 Cass