Post by Onyx on Jun 21, 2016 5:36:32 GMT -5
OOC: Hey everyone, this is Renée's funeral post, for my allies etc to post in to say goodbye to their friend. I didn't get upset when Renée was killed - there was nothing I could do to stop her getting attacked - but if you post in this thread uninvited and start a fight, I really will be. Please, PLEASE, if you have any respect for me, my dead tribute, and my friends - and you don't want to be at the receiving end of a whole lot of hate and anger - leave us alone. Thank you x
Filler in the mean time but the flow of this post is as follows:
Death description, getting her bones broken, thoughts about beauty etc
Allies all come around her, all of them badly injured too, other tributes trailing behind them. Renée tries to talk but can't move her jaw, trying to blink back tears but she still cries out of her one good eye, washing the blood away.
She reaches an arm up to Emmery and whispers to be taken to the golden haze she sees in the distance, mostly by pointing at it and gently turning Emmery's chin towards it. Thoughts about gold etc... As Emmery carries her, Renée rests her head against her chest as if Emmery were her mother.
They get to the lake, lots of descriptions, tells Iris she's really brave, and that she should wear her hair tied back. Tries to reach up to tie it for her but can't reach.
If anyone else wants to talk to Renée at this point let me know and I'll blurb it with you, I want to say goodbye to everyone bc she likes all of you even if she didn't say it at the time.
Finally; after everyone else, there's Heath. "I guess beauty isn't so important now," she says to him, smiling with her one eye because she can't do it with her mouth. "You couldn't save my life - but I think you've saved my soul." She squeezes his hand, reacts to whatever Heath wants to do.
You sail her out onto the lake. Mites buzz prettily overhead. After a bunch of character-developing flashbacks, she's dead.
Thank you's seem a bit overenthusiastic when Renée died this early, plus I've thanked you all directly, so I'll just find myself a pretty table and settle for that. Ta everyone for this short-lived joy xx
Filler in the mean time but the flow of this post is as follows:
Death description, getting her bones broken, thoughts about beauty etc
Allies all come around her, all of them badly injured too, other tributes trailing behind them. Renée tries to talk but can't move her jaw, trying to blink back tears but she still cries out of her one good eye, washing the blood away.
She reaches an arm up to Emmery and whispers to be taken to the golden haze she sees in the distance, mostly by pointing at it and gently turning Emmery's chin towards it. Thoughts about gold etc... As Emmery carries her, Renée rests her head against her chest as if Emmery were her mother.
They get to the lake, lots of descriptions, tells Iris she's really brave, and that she should wear her hair tied back. Tries to reach up to tie it for her but can't reach.
If anyone else wants to talk to Renée at this point let me know and I'll blurb it with you, I want to say goodbye to everyone bc she likes all of you even if she didn't say it at the time.
Finally; after everyone else, there's Heath. "I guess beauty isn't so important now," she says to him, smiling with her one eye because she can't do it with her mouth. "You couldn't save my life - but I think you've saved my soul." She squeezes his hand, reacts to whatever Heath wants to do.
You sail her out onto the lake. Mites buzz prettily overhead. After a bunch of character-developing flashbacks, she's dead.
Thank you's seem a bit overenthusiastic when Renée died this early, plus I've thanked you all directly, so I'll just find myself a pretty table and settle for that. Ta everyone for this short-lived joy xx