Help Me? (Stare)
May 14, 2014 20:48:14 GMT -5
Post by thompson harvard - d2b - arc on May 14, 2014 20:48:14 GMT -5
Ello~ I am Arc as you all know, and I think before I start role-playing a bit more I'd need to advance in my Quality of posts. Along with length but that can be later. I want more quality as in so it can keep my readers entertained and explain my characters thoughts, surroundings, and all that.
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James heard a loud noise, and he quickly darted his head towards the human who made the noise. It seemed like it was the boy he saw earlier, he was curious on if the boy was trying to get James' attention so he walked over. "Hey," He said with a smile, James was a bit scared for some reason. He didn't know if the boy wanted to talk to him or not, so he stood there. James started thinking about his horse, he wondered what it was doing right now. James shook it off in his head, but he accidentally did it too. "Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to do that, just thinking in my head." James said with a bit of worry in his eyes, he guessed the boy didn't mind.
So.. Yeah, if you could help me get more into details in my posts that'd be wonderful! Thanks for considering helping me out, and good day to you. :3
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After what the boy said, she remembered him. He was the one boy that was always teased and made fun of. She always wanted to meet him and become friends. It was funny, how people teased others. We are all people, I mean. Whats bullying gonna do for you? Make a Unicorn fart RAINBOWS? "Yeah, and besides. Teasing is rude. I have seen you around but I felt bad for you. I am teased too, ya know that right? I mean, whats it gonna do? Its not like you'll grow a beard and learn how to fly." Seriously, Its like trying to make your older/younger siblings shut up or something."Also, I am Luna Shim. But I don't really know how much that helps you know me." Luna said smiling, she wanted friends. Or at least someone to love. (not saying they should date)
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A Second one
James heard a loud noise, and he quickly darted his head towards the human who made the noise. It seemed like it was the boy he saw earlier, he was curious on if the boy was trying to get James' attention so he walked over. "Hey," He said with a smile, James was a bit scared for some reason. He didn't know if the boy wanted to talk to him or not, so he stood there. James started thinking about his horse, he wondered what it was doing right now. James shook it off in his head, but he accidentally did it too. "Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to do that, just thinking in my head." James said with a bit of worry in his eyes, he guessed the boy didn't mind.
So.. Yeah, if you could help me get more into details in my posts that'd be wonderful! Thanks for considering helping me out, and good day to you. :3